Return of the Acroylte

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THis is the story for my game, Return of the Acrolyte, the charecters, and the features.

Story: Every 5 years, worriors are made from scrach, to be sent on a voyage to the city of Sabetha. THe first one to pass the trials of all the sacred towers, and reach to Sabetha, will become an Acrolyte. When Lord Quail returns to his home town of Anturuk as an Acrolyte, he brings a strange vibe with him. Janar, the hero, is pulled into a protal and is sent to the other side of the world. He'll meet Jocko, Vanessa, Bear, and alue, an Acrolyte in training. when he realizes that Quail cheated his wayt into the voyage, the search for the rouge acroylte is on.
     Janar joins alue and her friends on her voyage, hopeing to find Quail, and return to Anturuk.

Playable Charecters:

Janar
Class: Striker
Weapon of Choice: Long-swords (Dawnblue)
Hair Color: Blond
Home Lands: Anturuk

Quail
Class: Acrolyte
Weapon of Choice: Spears
Hair Color Blue, silver
Home Lands: ?

Jocko
Class: Roller
Weapon of Choice: Magic Dice
Home Lands: Record Isle

Bear
Class: Cursed Saint
Weapon of Choise: Axe
Home Lands: Dephtol Forest

Vanessa
Class: Mage
Weapon of Choice: none
Home Lands: Record Isle

Alue
Class: Trainer
Weapon of Choice: Staff
Home Lands: none

Gate
Class: Gunner
Weapon of Choice: Guns
Home Lands: Pi Biral

Features:

- Charecter Switching
- Acrol Tower MiniGames( Align bells on the many flores to play the city's song, gain access to secrets in the city)
- Level up skills (so-old its new)
- Power up bells
- One time random encounters (find a secret spot in open fields were a strong, rare monster will apear, defeat it and get some cool stuff)

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This is the first Screen shot. Its of Record Isle, Earth temple.

[Leon_1990]

tht doesn't look 2 bad....

[RPG LORD]

Naw, that's right.

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I'm gonna ad some different details to the owers later, like an Earth symbol and a fire symbol, ect. Also, thier will be some bosses before you get to the roof.

[Leon_1990]

Originally posted by RPG LORD
Naw, that's right.

^??

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Second Screenshot. This is Saung, the Realm Between the worlds

[Dragonium]

Heh. Groovy.

No, really, looks good.

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thanks

[Darkfox]

Thats the gateway effect from Chrono Trigger, I would know it anywhere.

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it is...

[Ace of Spades]

Ok...the story sounds ok, however, no offense, but it doesn't "look" good. Right now, no offense once again, but your maps suck. You've really got to work on your mapping. The first one is supposed to be some kind of temple right? Well, the way you used that chipset, it's like, a poorly made cliff with a blue door, grass, and rocks on it. Sorry, but the blue door, blue flags and golden thingys don't fit well with it. Find a good temple chip, and also, play some well rated games that have a good rating for maps and graphics, so that you can get an idea on how to use chipsets the right way, and make your maps look better. I'm not trying to criticize your game, in fact, the story is pretty good. You do have to work on your mapping though, big time. Remember, I'm not saying the game is bad, I'm just trying to help you out in making maps look better. The way I learned, is playing other games that had good graphics. Also, playing real games, such as Treasure of the Rudras, Chrono Trigger, SoM, that sorta thing. It'll take time, but if you work hard at it, you'll get better.

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the rocks, grass, and yellow things make them look diferent, this is the earth temple, it also is just a work in progress, its not a temple to be exact, but a tower, they will look beter, this is just the first version.

Edit: and not that i don't apritiate advice, don't make me sound like i'm a noob, i've been useing rm2k3 for scicne it came out, and over the time i've learned a few neat tricks, i may be new to charas, but i'm no game making dummy.

[dragoninja]

Looks good! but don't you mean "acolyte" or is it suposed to be named "acrolyte"

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its saposed to be Acrolyte.