Midnight Warrior of Dantooine

[darkrune]

Originally posted by Sephiroth12317
Hmmm I see what you mean...Just yesterday I was typing the Story line for Blademon but when I was really far the program shut down and I lost all of it. So when I get a little further in my game I'll post the story line. Oh, and about Sidious being Anti-Alien, He hates them but that doesnt really mean that they cant be Dark Jedi right? Lol I'm also going to post some screen shots in a few mintues

Ok kool man.

[Sephiroth12317]

[GLOW]Ok here we go! My first Screen shot[/GLOW]

[Sephiroth12317]

Tell me what you think!

[lan-the phoenix holder]

nice pic

[Sephiroth12317]

Thanks i'll have more later

[Sephiroth12317]

Here is another one...its in a wookie outpost lol

[lan-the phoenix holder]

nice

[Sephiroth12317]

yeah

[Blademon]

Oh hey Sephiroth, since I'm on a roll right now, I was thinking of a character for a while for the game. I didn't know if he was good for the story that you had in mind, but here is his bio.


Name : (no clue I suck at those)
Side : Good. Not a Jedi or Sith
Age : 24
Planet : Dantooine
Abilities : can't use weapons in left arm.
Bio: When Ke'O Zenik was just begining his Sith training, his masters gave him a task to prove himself that he really is a Sith by raiding an innocent farm.

The farm was inhabited by (this guy) and his sister who were poor farmers trying to make a living. Zenik trying to prove his worth challenged (this guy) to a duel even though he was unarmed. His innexperience with the lightsaber showed as he was only able to scar (this guy)'s chest and left wrist. When the duel was finished, (this guy) was sentenced to death by being sent to a forced labor camp on an isolated planet, while his sister was enslaved.

Half-way across the galaxy while his slave ship was enroute to the isolated planet, it was misteriously attacked and crashed on a nearby planet. Finding himself as the only survivor of the crash, (this guy) quickly realised that he had to survive one way or another. Amongst the wreckage were some spare Iperial uniforms and he disguised himself as one. Upon reaching civilization again, he decides to pass for a new recruit, and start a new life that will take him eventually to his assaliant and sister...
(oof)

[ZeroKirbyX]

That first pic looks like honest to goodness crap. I can't tell what's going on. If the second is supposed to be a wookie colony it needs to be in the trees, like treehouses.

[Snake Eater]

The screens are pure crap.

[shinotebasiiackh]

I hope this is your first game. Otherwise, you really need to work on your maps.

[Sephiroth12317]

Wow I just started the game guys so calm down Ii will get better! And Blademon Thanks lol

[ZeroKirbyX]

Look, don't post, "What do you guys think?", if when we tell what we think and it's not what you wanna hear you dismiss it. If those are beginning screens and they are bad, then the obvious assumption is that it will be a crappy game. Name one game everyone knows and believes to be good where the first maps were crap, RPG wise of course. None, so maybe work on the maps. It's just like an intro to a book, good= you keep reading, but bad= given to a nazi book burning (maybe a little exaggerated, but you get the point)

[Sephiroth12317]

Ok Kirby 2 things for you

• List: Im not good at maps so I'll practice
• List: If your going to post things about my work PM me instead. Its easier lol

Ok? Now please if you want better screen shots, help me out! lol