a hero's journey

[mind-master: brain(mmb)]

In the wonderfull world of alistria there are far landscapes,
And beautifull lakes, forests of almost 50.000 kilometers long,
Good energy flows trough the lands and forests of alistria,
Great and mythic creatures walk the world,
And they can be hunted for prices,
Almost half of alistria is filled with good energy,
Almost…
In the deepest pits of the black mountains evil brews day by day,
Darkness has fallen over some of the land,
The pawns of darkness shall move to destroy all that is good,
In the center of the alistria, the core of the alistria,
Lies the darkest, most evil place in all of alistria,
The dark council, an evil necromancer and demon group is there,
They have sight over alistria trough the orb,
With this orb they can see anything on alistria,
And also… spawn evil.
But then, on the other side of the world,
On the other side of alistria, lies… the mendruan ocean,
This ocean is wide, and has only a small group of islands,
In the center of the ocean, is the biggest island,
This island has a couple of city’s and towns,
From there the so called medruans controll the ocean,
They have powerfull water-strengths,
And have the capability to summon sharks, wales, and even mythic sea legends,
Underneath the mendruan ocean, lie the underwater city’s,
No mortal man has ever been here,
These mythic city’s are the homes of vandlar,
An agressive kind that kills leviathans, leviathans are the source of light,
If they extinct, all light on alistria will fade,
Leviathans are some of the strongest light creatures on the planet.
There is one more place on alistria,
It is called refenis laguna, a ruined evil temple,
This city has been there for milenia,
And has been destroyed long ago by unknown forces,
In this temple lies a beautifull expensve treasure,
Many have tried to get it… all have failed,
No one knows what lies in this temple,
But all of alistria knows that it is not evil… not good,
Refenis laguna, a dark place, with unknown beasts.
The world of alistria further on is all a myth,
Un-discovered lands, with maybe even new inhabbitants,
Are you ready to scout alistria?



‘’once…on a small island unknown to our world, there lived a hero, he fought evil, and killed monsters.
Many victory’s he settled and many evil beasts where killed, but…on a day,
Evil began to brew, and it slayed many humans, and natives,
The hero, who had killed many evil , now had to stop this, he forged a blade so strong,
It could wipe out the entire evil race, but…he went to the dark council, to strike their leader.
A foolish mistake, the leader of the dark council, angnir, could not be killed by magical blades,
He would have to be killed by dark forces, wich the hero did not posses,
Angnir slayed the hero, and so came evil uppon alistria.’’

Cale listens to an old legend the town-elder once told him,
And thinks back of his father, the hero… the mighty man who tried to kill angnir,
He is grown up, and can take care of himself, the warrior within him is growing,
Angry he is, he wants revenge, he wants to destroy angnir, and revenge his dad,
Now he stands in a forest, and he has a girlfriend,
As an archer he is extremely fast, and he likes adventure.
The blood of his father, strongest hero on alistria, flows trough his body,
He is to become the strongest hero in all of alistria,
And destroy evil forever, the powers of the dark shall fall.



Name : cale
Age : 15
Mental job : aventurer
Physical job : archer

Biography :

Cale whas once a young boy dreaming of being a hero,
Fighting evil side by side with his friends,
This came treu,
He is an archer, and seeks for adventure around alistria,
Cale is a caring boy, who loves his friends, and cares for them,
He isnt a ‘’hit-and-run’’ archer, so he likes to fight enemy’s face to face.
He does not only fight with bows, he also fights with swords,
The blood of his father, a mighty hero that has died, flows trough his veins,
Overall cale is a fine friend, and good archer.


Name : shade
Age : 28
Mental job : emerald collector
Physical job : mage

Biography :
Shade is a wizard born in a small town near the medruan ocean, in this town mages where in charge,
Lucky him, shade whas the son of the mightyest mage in town,
His father, validor, gave him a small amount of his powers,
A day later an evil force killed his father, shade seeks revenge,
He travels only in night time, in day light, he is in towns, to buy things,
With many mage powers shade is a strong mage,
Overall shade is seeking revenge, and is sometimes very egoistic.


Name : lisa
Age : 20
Mental job : blacksmith
Physical job : medruan

Biography :
Lisa is a young medruan women,
She forges weapons, and uses them to defend the medruan islands,
In the past her parents showed her the treasures that lie in the islands,
And now she must protect them, she creates weapons from resources,
That she collects from the caves near her town,
Overall lisa is a nice and lovely women.


Name : lana
Age : 15
Mental job : scientist
Physical job : mage

Biography :
Lana is a young girl, whos family has died, murdered by evil,
Now she is alone, in a creul world, alone in the dark,
On a day cale found her, and now they are in love with each other,
Lana is sometimes very depressed, when she thinks back of her parents,
But then cale tries to cheer her up,
Lana is obsessed with science, and likes to create potions,
Togheter lana and cale are a good team.
Overall lana is a beautifull young, but depressive girl.

this is the main info, also this is the main storyline,
oh before i forget to say, as you might know from the lost cause,
the critter-system returns:D,
for those who liked it, it is slightly improved.

Critter-system :
In the world of alistria you find small furry, and insectian creatures,
These arent just creatures, these are critters,
They are small, and harmless.
With these critters you have 3 options ;

1.eat the critter ( health )
2.take the critter ( money/sell )
3.attack the critter ( experience )

there are thousands of critters around alistria,
and you can eat as many as you want!
These critters can be very usefull in some situations,
So use them well.

i have plenty more idea's and systems,
ill keep you all posted, and give them away around time,
ill also try making chapter two of the story,
i will post the story in chapters like a book, so itt will be litle more exciting, anyways... ill be working!:)

[Dragonchick93]

it sounds good! its worth to work on

[Leon_1990]

OMG! hope you actually FINISH this time -_-''

btw, i like ur sig dragonchick

[mind-master: brain(mmb)]

thanks dragonchick, woot we got a new girl on charas XD,
anyways... leon...whas that a compliment...or...an insult?
yes i will finish this one!!! XD i........hope:p

[Dragonchick93]

lol

[Ace of Spades]

It's rather cliche, but if you add things like side quests and such, you should be able to work around it. Btw, it sounds like this is a VERY big world. Hehe..that should be fun to map... Anyway, good luck! ^^

[mind-master: brain(mmb)]

thanks ace, yeah i know its sounds kinda cliché, but your an adventurer, d'oh so youll get loads of other quests;),
and ill be sure to add stuff,
yeah the world is gonna be HUGE.

[Dragonchick93]

i just have 1 simple question

[mind-master: brain(mmb)]

um....yeah..... ask away... ^_^

[Dragonchick93]

wat rating is it supposed to be
ya no:
e-everyone
t-teen
m-mature
a-adults
?i wood just like to no thats it

[mind-master: brain(mmb)]

LOOOOL!!! em....well...i dunno,
its not like its gonna have BLOOD in it, so...
but it is gonna be SPOOKY lol, like at the council part, and the ruins.
so id rate it....errrr..... teen XD

[Dragonchick93]

mmm.....lol okay
wait! y isnt it gunna hav blood?
because teen has stuff like:
violence,mild language,and sexual or suggestive themes
and i bet its not gonna hav that and skimpy colthing but
y not blood?

[mind-master: brain(mmb)]

lol, well... i dunno, its not like youll ''slash''sumeone down when walking the world, its more battle in battle system... i geuss
lol, violence will be in it:p, and sex...em......maybe XD

[Dragonchick93]

...T.T
how old are you?
because that sorda makes me shiver
hehe....um...thats okay i guess.
i hav 3 older bros and they get games like
that
DOA extreme beach volleyball
lol

[Rune_of_Punishment]

Sounds like a LOTR thing. Plus, the main character is 15, making him seem more immature than the older folk. I would rethink that part.