The lost life of Simon

[maxine]

Hmm ok i know all about my game and so.... I will write the story right here... Never done it before hehe.. Here it comes:

                                   The lost life of Simon



When a strange blue flame kands on Earth, 2 men discovers it and soon notices that there isnt just a blue flame. Its an human form inside. An human called Simon. Simon soon gets captured (cause when he lands he has monstrus form). And in prison he discovers that he turns into an human. On the escape of torture and pain he hears that another blue flame has landed o earth. Who can that be? a relative ? someone he knows?. Anyway the other blue flame held an evil human. That blue flame wants too destroy earth and its only Simon ( the good blue flame ) that will be able too destroy him.......

**** it was hard writing... pretty messed up but i really hope you get my story

[True Evil]

I understand it and I like it! All though it does kind of remind me of Goku and Raditz, anyway, Good luck on making your game Maxine!

[DragonBlaze]

I like that idea. One thing, dose the "good blue flame guy" know his past and such, or does he have amnesia?

It reminds me of FFIX where Zidane and that Kudja (or whatever his name was) were from that other planet and were sent to destroy the planet, but then Zidane didn't remember and ended up working to stop the other dude from his planet.

But its imposible to make a game that dosen't resemble an exsiting plot in some way. Good luck with this one!

[Sephiroth rocks]

Yeah I like the story. But Simon's kinda lil too regular name. But it's nice to see a newbie making a non-fangame game!

[blackskullwarlock]

Sounds good so far but isn't Simon a little bit too..common? He's from another planet after all....or atleast another world.

[maxine]

hehe ok i start with

true evil: thanks !!

DragonBlaze: He just lands on earth and while on the quest he soon gets some flashbacks of what was happening and about his past.

Sepiroth: ye i know. Simon is a known name BUT i started my whole RPG carrier cuz of a friend called Simon so thats why i picked it. And thanks !

[maxine]

OK sry for doublepost here

Blackskull: ye i know... Hey ive got an idea ... I havent done pretty much of the game so i can still change the name.. Any good names on ur heads?

[Dashman]

the story looks fine. I think it should be interesting to play.

[maxine]

hmm ye i hope so aswell. The bad thing is that i aint creating my own stuff. I only download and so. But i am a good game creator so i hope alla players wont mind

[DragonBlaze]

Very few people make their game's graphics, a handfull of people make their hero character's graphics, but thats about it. I haven't seen anyone who has made a game with completely custome made resources that they themselves made (but there may be some out there)

As long as everything isn't rtp graphics, I doubt many people will have a problem with them

[maxine]

thats wise words Dragonblaze. My hero ( Simon in this case ) has the Chrono trigger chara. BUT you aint thinking him as Chrono trigger cuz i made my own battle chara. And ive made another custom player named "Rosie". And ive downloaded much which not belongs too RTP so thanks dragon, My soul feels much better now

[True Evil]

Try to get some screen shots as soon as you can! Me love teh screen shots!

[maxine]

Actually True evil and all other guys... I dont think you will be so breathless over my game. It has no features... Ive only had RPG maker for 2 weeks. But it may be enjoying too play it anyways

and sure. Screenshots will be up in PNG. Format

[maxine]

Maybe hartbreaking news for all that wanna play my game soon. BUT its my absolutely first attempt so it will be much RTP involved =(. Hope u can see it as a ( noob but maybe good game )

[Leon_1990]

who cares if its your first ^^
U can still make a good game if you put your mind to it
I remember how fun my first game was....
ahhh....good times