A Knight Soul

[Blazingheart]

Well,i am not good at storys,but here is it:

HISTORY
Its About this guy Sengal,(The bad guy),Goes to the arena,and says I have some kind of power that is of him,and then You go to a castle to request soldiers to kill him,but they got allied with Falcone,and I have until there now

CHARCTERS

Name: Blaze
Age: 20
Weapon: 2 Daggers
Bio: A Warrior Enchated with Thievery Skills

Name: Solian
Age: 28
Weapon: Sword
Bio: Before The Arena Thing,Best Companion of Sengal

Name: Ray
Age: 20
Weapon: Katana
Bio: Samurai Trained with Ninja Skills,An old Friend Of Blaze

Name: Kiro
Age: 23
Weapon: I dont know which weapon will he use....
Bio: A Bounty Hunter that wants to kill Sengal

ENGINES

Maybe there will be some duels,the game will be for RPG maker 2000 with battle animations,and some funny minigames,
I will put screenies tomorrow

[WarxePB]

Your "story" makes very little sense. It might be a good idea to elaborate on it a bit.

And isn't Sengal one of ZeroKirbyX's characters?

[Blazingheart]

Ok,I will try ot get the story better,And yes,Sengal is one of ZKX Characters,I will Change the name,but if he says that i cant use his char,I will Change it

[Leon_1990]

a swordsman named solian....

change that.

[ZeroKirbyX]

Yeah, maybe you should elaborate on the story. And yeah, I'd appreciate it if you just changed his name.

[Blazingheart]

But I like Solian,And these are the screens,they are in spanish because i will make the game both in spanish and english
This is 1 One

[Blazingheart]

2 One

[Leon_1990]

I hope you have dragonium's permission to use that system.

seriously, change the name solian, or  the class at least.

Solian the swordsman has already been taken.

[Blazingheart]

Ok,Here I go,solian now is called Azrael,Sengal Now be called Falcon,And i Changed the system for this one:

[Dragonium]

Thanks for changing the system.

This looks like it could go places. Keep it up.

Yeah, and if a name has been taken, try not to use it. If you really didn't know, it's okay.

[ZeroKirbyX]

Wait... it that Sengal's sprite?

[Blazingheart]

Ok,I got a new history,There was once a Time,4 diferent Gods,
Atlanta,God of Wind and light,the one which decided ot take care of the Humans,Silkus,God of Fire and Darkness,The one that deicded to take care of demons and monsters,Kirik,God of Earth,and Father of Gnomes,and Zabulon,God of Water,and Father of all Sea life Forms,One Day,Silkus,Decided to finish all the other Gods,And conquer Humans.Gnomes and Kill the sea Life Forms,Atlanta (Is a woman) discovered it and sned a message to Kirik and Zabulon,and they joined
to finish all the demons and monsters,and Atlanta,Killed Silkus....
4000 Years Later,The Soul Of A Knight Prophecy Says,that the osn of Silkus,(Falco) Should Try to conquer all the world,and The Strengh of Atlanta should Reborn on a Warrior,so he could Finish Silkus Son,

What do you think of that?

[darkrune]

Falco, reminds me of Star Fox

[Blazingheart]

Sure,do you all like the new story,it is above  

[InsaneJP]

hmm your new story is better and it has more detail but it still needs to be clearer...you have alot of commas and alot of stuff just jammed together. Other then that when you post characters have a more in depth bio about them because you dont tell much about them at all and another tip is get everything ready for your game and your story straight before you post it so when you do its a real good post!