Realms of the Demons

[Tomi]

.::Story::.    

     About 3000 years ago, the world of the Demons and the world of the Human were one.  Humans and demons moved freely throughout both worlds for ages.  Then there was a group of corrupted demons that planed to take over both worlds, seizing total control.  The human leaders heard this, and decided to put a stop to it.  The humans gathered up a group of wizards to combat the demons, and the demon leaders gathered up an army to fight for them.  All demons were banished from the human world, and all humans from the demon world.  The Demon Leaders strategically built portals between the two worlds so they could have easy access to the key points of the human population.  The human wizards found out about this, and used the portals for their own advantage in battle.  Both sides fought hard, but the brute force of the large demon army started to press on the humans.  The humans were losing.  The leader of wizards, named Hoji Altec had an idea to end the war.  He was going to seal off the portals so the demons could no longer get through.  The only bad thing was that he would have to cast it from inside the demon world, which would lock him in.  Altec decided to try to modify the spell so only humans could go through to the demon world, and only humans could deactivate the spell on all 4 of the portals.  As he was casting this weeklong spell, he was attacked, and, defenseless, was killed a day before he could finish.  The demons thought that they had won, but when they tried to go through, they couldn't.  After the demon’s wisest wizards examined the sealed portals, they figured out that only humans could pass into their world, and yet that was a very rare occasion.  Yet it was legend that if a human were to deactivate all of the portals, he could get back home, but all the demons could too.

     Now, some 3000 years later, a mercenary named Tomi was hired to find some rare herbs called Engaropla to heal a rich noble's daughter of cholaria.  As he was looking for these, he stumbled through some sort of invisible portal to another dimension, another world.  He quickly found that this world was run and lived in by the demons, a race that, in human legend, was pure evil.  As he was wandering through this forest in the new world, he was ambushed by 3 large, brutal, and vicious demons, who seemed to be barbarians in this area.  He was saved by a demon necromancer named Mortuus, who summoned a skull to shield Tomi from their attacks.  After they defeated them, Tomi said thanks, and tried to go back to his own world, but the portal in which he came through had sealed, and there was no way back.  Mortuus brought Tomi back to his village where he learned of the legend of the Four Portals of Altec, and that if he unlocked them all, the portal through which he came through would open up, and he could go back into his own world. But some have other plans for him...

.::Characters::.


Name: Tomi
Age: 17
Race: Human
Class: Mercenary
Weapon: Falchion
Bio:
Tomi's parents abandoned him at age 4 on the streets of Titan.  To get food, he first tried stealing, but it didnt always work out. Because of this, he decided to work for his food and moneyinstead of selfishly taking them.  Because he was young, it was hard for him to get a job, and he was always being hired and fired, and often held many jobs in a week.  At age 7, he left for the countryside, looking for whatever job he could get to support himself.  He was an aeronaut at one point, a soldier, a hired thief, and many other things.  He gained the reputation as a skilled mercenary, and has many skills because of the many jobs he has had.

Name: Mortuus
Age: 120
Race: Half Demon
Class: Necromancer
Weapon: Spears, Pikes, and Halberds
Bio:  Coming Soon

Name: Serina
Age: 108
Race: Demon
Class: Holy Mage
Weapon: Axe
Bio: Coming Soon

Name: Fenix
Age: 12
Race: Fox Demon
Class: Thief
Weapon: Dual Knives
Bio: Coming Soon

.::Screens::.
 



.::Features::.

- CMS (as seen above)
- "Rush" attacks (Limit Break with real time button action... XD)
- Learn skills from Equipment by doing quests
- Beastary
- Battling Card Game
- Some sort of thing, like chocobos...

So, yeah, this is what I have so far...  Any and all comments are welcome!  

[InsaneJP]

very very good my friend!! cant wait to see the "rush" technique in actioan and your CMS is looking great!  

[Ace of Spades]

Your ideas suck, this game sucks, and you suck.


















J/K!!! XD It's looking good so far dude. I definately can't wait to see the rush thing, and your CMS looks great. Keep up the good work! ^^

[PyroAlchemist]

WOW! This game sounds awesome! I wanna see it when you get it finished.

[CoolZidane]

Sounds very good. I'll check it out when it's finished.

[Snake Eater]

Tomi, thats looks very good. Good luck!

[Luthien Ichijo]

Ok, would you explain one thing to me?

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About 3000 years ago, the world of the Demons and the world of the Human were one. Humans and demons moved freely throughout both worlds for ages. Then there was a group of corrupted demons that planed to take over both worlds, seizing total control. The human leaders heard this, and decided to put a stop to it. The humans gathered up a group of wizards to combat the demons, and the demon leaders gathered up an army to fight for them. All demons were banished from the human world, and all humans from the demon world.
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The worlds were one right? But then how are they seperate? If they are two seperate worlds you should state so in the story.

Other than that it sounds pretty good ^_^

[PyroAlchemist]

...Uh...how did you catch that I just went by it.

[Tomi]

Originally posted by Luthien Ichijo
Ok, would you explain one thing to me?

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About 3000 years ago, the world of the Demons and the world of the Human were one. Humans and demons moved freely throughout both worlds for ages. Then there was a group of corrupted demons that planed to take over both worlds, seizing total control. The human leaders heard this, and decided to put a stop to it. The humans gathered up a group of wizards to combat the demons, and the demon leaders gathered up an army to fight for them. All demons were banished from the human world, and all humans from the demon world.
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The worlds were one right? But then how are they seperate? If they are two seperate worlds you should state so in the story.

Other than that it sounds pretty good ^_^

GRRRR!!! Stupid loophole...  What I mean is that you could travel between the worlds, and that there were demons in the human world and humans in the demon world.  And then they closed it off when the war started.  Its basicly just there to show that humans and demons can live in harmony.

[drenrin2120]

ahh... although the main story is a little cliche. There are plenty of original ideas to make it a good story. I think this is one of the better games to be coming otu as of lately. Good luck!

[darkrune]

I like it, 3000 years is a bit long, but hey nice screenies

[Tomi]

Thanks for all the comments!  And darkrune, 3000 years is SUPPOSED to be long, so the humans cant remember when they live alongside the demons.  And Drenin, dont worry about it being cliche, theres a HUGE twist in the plot, but I'm not tellin what it is...

[Bart_Fatima]

hey bud! nice story, is this your first game? that you posted on charas? just wondering.

Your main dude tomi's face is cool.

[Tomi]

I posted one before, but I quit it the next day.  This one, however, I have been working on for months already geting the story together and tweaked.  Yeah, and in case anyone didnt know, thats Tomi's faceset in my avatar right now...

Oh yeah, I was just messing around with Tomi's charaset, and made a few poses.  I think I may have lost some of my pose making ability, but, here they are anyway.

[Bart_Fatima]

yeah if you  stop making poses(Like I did) You lost your old touch. Like that Duran character, awesome poses. Now I can only do climbing ladder poses >_>

Tomi, I am really looking forward to playing your game