Elementa episode 1:Time and Time again

[Deathreaper]

Befroe I get to the story I would like to tell you guys that it is not the same story. The other one I decided to make it a prequil. Okay, sue me! I'll just go and get the other handful of Lawyers I have waiting for me at my front door. I know this is the second or thrid time I did this, but so what? To make it up I have skits and map's in this thread. appy now? okay then I will go to the story, with a map.


Well, the map said the status of the organizations.
The order of the 4 are the Elementals. They protect Europe and anywhere else that need protection. Eachelemental has an army and they are spread into two groups. in to contrays. Keisui's armyGaurds Spain and France. Kaki's army guards Germany and Poland. Nothing Speical happens when she comes. Tsuchi gaurds Greece and all the little contrays above it. Greece thinks that she's a Goddess and they make statues of her. She gets annoyed, but not all of her. For in her ver body hold the souls of the her former organization which was an all female organization, for she planned to absorb then to be human. Some times they act on their own, but they don't cayse trouble for most people. Well, expext for one person, but That will wait for the main parts on the story. She has a son and he was 5 at the beginning of the story. But, he is now 15. Tenrai's Army guards Italy and She stays there for the art, books, music and everthing else that makes it great. It's like she stepped into Hevean. Of couse, each Elemental need a body for protection from the other. But, it has to be a dead one, also they can regenerate the flesh. Every, year or so they travel to England to have meets(Not really, just goof around, just kidding.).They don't have just armies., they have special groups to take care of special emenies. But in this group the Elemental must be a member and it's not Just the Elementals that are grand members of the concil. Human can be ones too.
The Raiko family.
If anyone told that Ben Frank discovered electricity then it is a damn dirty lie. IN the coolest place on Earth the Artic is the most advance civilizationof it's time. This is the 600's ad they use electricity to heat their homes, fuction machines and have light. And this is all thanks to the Raiko family. Their Lightning elemental powers have charged the machines they use. The leader of this is Raiko IV (A.K.A Arlex), he is over 500 years old and dose look it. His brother Cy guards the main gate, he is old too, but he has no children and would give his life to guard that gate. Although, Cy has no children Raiko IV dose. He has Raiko V is his only child And Raiko V's child is Raiko VI. Together they are the Raiko Family. Keisui dose vist them some times and hen Talk to RaikoIV, but she calls him Arlex. Also, the UFO's were the testing the the Artic is doing. Huh, what would happen if there was a Raiko Kennedy?
On to Ban
Ban are keeping their plans secret from me. Their Leader is Kizikun, a feirce and powerful Dokei who's soul desire is to take all in the world as his own. He is like a terrorist.
We don't know much about him but he is a bad guy.

Dokei Race
The Dokei race are basiclly Reptiles, exsept their warm blooded. They can shapeshift and since I hate for them to be another gender, they can only turn into things of their gender. But, they are mostly not homocidle. They mostly take on a human appearnce and live nomal live(well with shapeshifting). But, 500 of these creatures are rarely the same. When they are born they tend to have their own special ability and each ability can be on a scale to E to S class. But, be warned even a E classDokei is a challeng to kill. But, they are not really trying to control the world.

The main story
There are these two Brothers Roy and Brandon Saidus who are, you guessed it, Orphans, their from Spain. Well, kind of Orphans. They have a persin who they live with and watches them. Her name is Pura and she is a Dokei. They are so fond of her they that they call her their sister. They also have a best friend, Nina. But, they both have a crush on her and Roy would be the one who would try the hard and get something special. BUt, she would like Brandon better no matter how crappy the present is. This would upset him, but never the less if he cried she wouldn't care. which is very,very cruel. Ex. If Roy gave her a basket of flowers she would say that she was Allergic. Then when Brandon gave her a died flower she would act like it was the best present in the world. Poor Roy. T_T
One day Ban's Arm came and attacked. Remember Kids if a huge Army that is so large that you would neem to be in a hillacoper to see the 6 mile army tells you to came here. Run, run far way or tell an adult. And if they say there's candy in the arrow then go over there and get some candy. remember Safety First! Wow, that was a waste of time. Anyway they then set fire to the village and the Brandon Roy and Pura were still in the house. Whenthey saw the fire it had touched their roof. As the ceiling was coming down Pura then told them to get down and then sheilded them with her body. After that BRandon and Roy cried a river of Tears for their "sister's" death and found no trace of Nina. Then as fate had it, Keisui came by and took the boys as her own. 10 years after the boys became members of the order of 4's knights. With Keisui they defeated every enemy they came across. But, Keisui always would hold Roy back as he took a rank up, Keisui made it so he took one down. but, Brandon's ranks increased. Keisui thought that Brandon was stronger because he was older. But, it got to the point where Roy would get stronger everyday to prove that he was stronger. Oh, yeah at the part where I said that the sprite that Tsuchi has would cuase Trouble for someone, that was Roy. They go to him any change Tsuchi's in town. Since, Tsichi's earth she's made of clay. SO, she can look human also, she's the only one that dosen't need a human body. Well, anyway Roy and Brandon still live with Keisui even though their 20. They have grown attached to her. Well, that's all. Hope You will like the game. And I know you will not be able to sue me.

[PyroAlchemist]

No hablo su lengua de la luna.[/B]

No idea what he said but I like the idea

[Deathreaper]

WTF?!

[Deathreaper]

Okay, I might have demo soon.

[PyroAlchemist]

I see the pics were taken down. LOL Well come forth with the demo.

[Neonlare]

Mmmm, nice idea with the Modern world being the basis of this fantasy RPG.

What do you want the intro to be like? I'm affraid if anyone here has played Disgaea (Or an even better example, Tales of Symphonia's Skits), that's what the cutsceens will mostly consist of...

EDIT EDIT EDIT!!!


I might as well have a go at an attempt to animate it, maybe it will work out...

[Leon_1990]

Time and Time again, a rip off from the subtitle of Azrael's FF game

[Neonlare]

I'm sorry Death, but I had a go at drawing the characters, and for some reason beyond me, I just can't get it right, so I'm afraid I'm going to have to resign from doing animations along time until I get alot better...

[Deathreaper]

Originally posted by Neonlare
I'm sorry Death, but I had a go at drawing the characters, and for some reason beyond me, I just can't get it right, so I'm afraid I'm going to have to resign from doing animations along time until I get alot better...

(Sorry it took me so long to reply, but I was not on for a while) OKay I understand. But first I shall quote a SWE3 scene.
Darth Vader:Nooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay, moment over.

[Meiscool-2]

Speaking of darth vader's dumb NOOOOOOOOOOOOO scene, has anyone seen the No-ller coaster clip?

[Deathreaper]

No I haven't.

[Meiscool-2]

Not to be off topic, but it's really funny. I can't give a link, but if you google it I'm sure you'll get it.

Basically it plays that NOOOOOOOOOO thing while vader is riding a roller coaster, and the pitch increases as he's going up/down respectivly.

You gotta try to find it and watch it. Best 8 seconds ever.

[Deathreaper]

Dear Charas,
I Have been here fight Ban and protecting the weak,poor,young and old, it feels good. But, there is something troubling me, it's Keisui. She always lie on me to get me held back so I dobn't don't get killed, but SHE CAN GO (BLEEP) HERSELF!!!!! THAT *BLEEPING* *BLEEP* IS A TOTAL *BLEEEP* UP!! I AM TRIED OF HER *BLEEP*, I'M *BLEEPING* 21!!! BRANDON IS ONLT 5 *BLEEPing* YEARS OLDER THEN ME, YOU *BLEEP* . I still have a lot of pride fighting the good fight, but with minor issues. Don't worry Charas I will tell you how I'm doing soon.

Love,
Roy Saidus  

[Deathreaper]

Okay, the Demo will come soon after I get resources.

[benosalankelley]

 

Time and Time again, a rip off from the subtitle of Azrael's FF game

so okay, no one can use time and time again, just because some one using use the subtitle. Unless you use the subtitle as a "normal title" and it might work if you change the storyline.