Emiir-art

[Moosetroop11]

It looks great so far, although, as MIC said, incredibly jumpy. I like the people, although the animation style works slightly less well it's closer up to their faces.

I'll reserve judgement until you finish, but it looks good.

[emiiru]

 one part zoro & one part Sasuke

Look at all that juice!

[Moosetroop11]

The drawing is great in both, and I love the perspective in the second one.
Your drawing is so much better than a lot of fairly popular webcomic artists' work.

If I had to give criticism, I'd say the pole is a bit weird in the first one, as it changes position after it goes behind Zoro.

[Revolution911]

Zoro's mouth and fingers look awkward.
Sasuke's hand is weird.

[emiiru]

The wood pole is actually a bokken, but it is quite misshapen... I suppose.

The knuckle region on Sasuke's hand is off, that's for sure.  

Journal logo my soon to be DA journal logo  

once I do the CSS to it anyways.

look out for my next work, maybe in a week or two.

Some old things from my sketchbook. I just got around to scanning some things at the school.  

Live action gorillaz.
Murdoc
2-D (the worst drawn)
Noodle
 
 Russel
  Basketball drawing

 Do Smoke

[Moosetroop11]

You got Murdoc's expression just right.

[emiiru]

thanks.

Weregnome and I agreed that Murdocs face would better a bit longer & narrower, though

Nef- A monochromatic piece...

I'm on some sort of a roll here, people.
*NEW*

Another drawing

 Movie Night

[emiiru]

lots of other stuff has been finished, but I digress.

The attachment is part of that semi-DA wide thing everyone's doing that ISN'T yaoi for a change.

 Check out my gallery too, if you give a ****.[/URL

whadya think??

[emiiru]

 inked drawing

[emiiru]

 Maple Character sketches

 my gallery, if you're interested in more or don't like maple.

 traditional animation I did a while back

[Moosetroop11]

I love the maple sketches. It looks like your drawings are becoming freer, the lines are better.

[Almeidaboo]

Emi, I just enteder DA after along while and saw this: http://sole-soul.deviantart.com/art/head-rotation-58955456

Is that me me? Like, me?

[emiiru]

lol it's this inside thing in this club i re-started in high school carried into college. I think you influenced it indirectly though.

[Revolution911]

Your hands can be pretty big in some of these, but I like big hands, so s'cool.  But if you're going for more of a realistic look, tone them down a bit.

Your heads are always too big.  Definately tone those down.


You seem to have a nice grasp on human anatomy though.  Your problems rely mainly in the head/face.  Also,  your depth/perspective/foreshortening could use some work.

Nothing life drawing wont fix.  Good stuff, just try to fix up a bit on those bits and pieces.

[emiiru]

posted on DA, but since it's spriting related i thought i'd repost.