A small comic I made.

[Ephiam]

o.o Niiiice.  Wel, if you can then I would like you to.  I'd like to look at it when colored ^.^  No rush though, whenever you feel up to it, if you want to finish it that is.

[EXO Muffin]

AWESOME! Also, I use Photoshop 5 for it. To color, I just use 50% opaque color burn with the darkest shade of the color(;it turns black and stuff into a dark shade of the color), darken with the middle color(at 50% opaque), and lighten with the light shade(50%, again), then lighten it at 10-33% opaque color of light source. It's aaaalll in the Photoshop.

[EXO Muffin]

I upgraded the speech bubbles! Bwahahaha!

[Ephiam]

Good ^^.  It looks nice.  Hope ya don't mind doin it.

[I Have a Sandwich]

Why wold you use bevel bubbles? They always looked unprofessional to me.

[EXO Muffin]

I dunno. Just stroking the bubbles looked too boring, to me. Ew.

Guy1:Hey, what'cha doing?

Guy2:We're maintaing these locations.

Guy2:We have to send feedback information to the people there; the dots.*points*

Guy1:Can you...talk to the dots?

Guy3: Houston, drive 3...over.

Guy1: Oh. Cool. Can you talk to them, again?

Guy2: No, sorry. That might agitate the dots.

Guy3: We DON'T agitate the dots.

Guy4: *comes in* What? Who's agitatin' mah dots?

Guy4: *faces Guy1*'Chu agitatin' mah dots?!

[Ephiam]

o.o?   So..uh..hows the coloring goin? lol.  Well, while i'm at nothing I decided to practice yet again.

Yes, yes, I know.  It's basically a copy (well, more than that -.-) of the FMA manga.  But, I'm just using it to practice drawing and such.  But...it didn't turn out NEARLY as good as it does in person for some odd reason  Oh-well....ugh, here it is.   (NOTE: it reads from left to right ^^)




(not as good as any manga page, I know.  But it's a start -.-)

[EXO Muffin]

Looks good; but that's not Edward's hairstyle. His is more Sephiroth bangs+Mullet back+pony tail.

[Ephiam]

Ya...I kind of screwed up on the hair.  But, oh-well.  That's the only way to learn =P

[GrooveMan.exe]

It's too large. If this comic is indeed styles for the net, resizing is in order; try not to go taller than 1.5 screens and no wider than one screen only.

Oh, and it's not funny. It's not a requirement, but that's expected from most comics.

I don't draw loads, so I can't comment on the artwork, but it seemed clear enough (even if I had to scroll around to see most of it).

[Ephiam]

So which one are you talking about? lol.  The newest one or the old ones?

anywhoo..I'm still wondering if EXO is working on my comic thing still

[Moosetroop11]

Todays pointers are:
1) It's a little too big and sketchy to understand
2) You need to have a clearer text in those bubbles.

[EXO Muffin]

Erk...I'll get to it, eventually...I don't really feel like it right now. I'm really sorry.

[I Have a Sandwich]

Originally posted by GrooveMan.exe
It's too large. If this comic is indeed styles for the net, resizing is in order; try not to go taller than 1.5 screens and no wider than one screen only.

Oh, and it's not funny. It's not a requirement, but that's expected from most comics.

It doesnt have to be funny. A good webcomic is either one of two things: funny or rather good artwork, or just good.

[Ephiam]

Originally posted by I Have a Sandwich

quote:

Originally posted by GrooveMan.exe It's too large. If this comic is indeed styles for the net, resizing is in order; try not to go taller than 1.5 screens and no wider than one screen only. Oh, and it's not funny. It's not a requirement, but that's expected from most comics.

It doesnt have to be funny. A good webcomic is either one of two things: funny or rather good artwork, or just good.

It wasn't mean to be funny (which ever one your talking about).  But... it might not have good artwork OR be just good.  I dunno, fe me, I think it's good.


Any, EXO, it's ok.  I was in no rush...I was just wondering why you never mention it .