Guitar Riff/Intro

[drenrin2120]

Here's a riff and such I've been tinkering around with. What do you think? PS: Excuse the crappy recording, you may have to turn your computer's volume up a bit high.

http://media.putfile.com/Guitar-Intro

[Desimodontidae]

Hmm... not bad. It could be just me, but the distorted part sounds kinda choppy... meh.

[drenrin2120]

Yeah, it is a little bit. I noticed that after I posted, I thought i'd only messed up once and it was subtle, but I guess not. I'll get a better version up sometime.

[Linkizcool]

Not bad, but the tempo seems off in some parts.

[Emerates]

The quiet part was good, but the distortion I didn't much like.  Sorry.

[drenrin2120]

Originally posted by Linkizcool
Not bad, but the tempo seems off in some parts.

I can see how the tempo would be hard to follow without drums.

The quiet part was good, but the distortion I didn't much like. Sorry.

Yeah, I understand, I guess it's an acquired taste.