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Offline Egnio

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Re: I draw stuff.
« Reply #30 on: September 07, 2008, 08:54:10 PM »
Not a drawing, but meh.

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Re: I draw stuff.
« Reply #31 on: September 07, 2008, 09:25:37 PM »
What is that, just assorted models you've found for Gary's mod?
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Re: I draw stuff.
« Reply #32 on: September 07, 2008, 10:55:52 PM »
Sure looks like it...
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Re: I draw stuff.
« Reply #33 on: September 07, 2008, 11:36:56 PM »
Sonic: Oh, man. I'm so wasted. *hic*
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Re: I draw stuff.
« Reply #34 on: September 08, 2008, 12:31:33 AM »
Quote from: ZeroKirbyX on September 07, 2008, 09:25:37 PM
What is that, just assorted models you've found for Gary's mod?

Why yes, they are ;)
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Re: I draw stuff.
« Reply #35 on: September 08, 2008, 02:46:16 AM »
Quote from: Uberpwn_w00t on September 07, 2008, 11:36:56 PM
Sonic: Oh, man. I'm so wasted. *hic*
Wasted on Dr. Pepper?! What a lightweight!
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Re: I draw stuff.
« Reply #36 on: September 19, 2008, 10:48:34 AM »
NOT DEAD YET *Le gasp*

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Re: I draw stuff.
« Reply #37 on: September 19, 2008, 04:55:15 PM »
Yeah, the game might as well have been about witchcraft, given all the negative media it's received...
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Re: I draw stuff.
« Reply #38 on: September 21, 2008, 09:14:23 PM »


Awesomeness to whoever can guess which game features the circus in the background :D
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Re: I draw stuff.
« Reply #39 on: September 21, 2008, 10:50:44 PM »
...What do you have against folds in clothing?
He looks very plain.  You just kinda threw on some blood to spice him up.

Also his shoes are just red blobs.
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Re: I draw stuff.
« Reply #40 on: September 22, 2008, 12:15:25 AM »
Quote from: Revolution911 on September 21, 2008, 10:50:44 PM
...What do you have against folds in clothing?
He looks very plain.  You just kinda threw on some blood to spice him up.

Also his shoes are just red blobs.


Uhm... there are folds (just a few, and marked by shade, but meh), and the style I use tries to shade deep areas, which would make the shoes look a bit more profound if you actually pay attention. I dunno what you're expecting, but I try to keep it kind of simple, rather than making it way too realistic or manga-like, since I fail at it. So just keeping it simple (exaggerating the blood, of course ;3)

About the blood... no. It was kind of a request. It's the second time I draw the very same character all covered with blood. I did add the background to spice it up a bit though. Last time it was just a red background, and now it's the Meat Circus... with a mostly empty way between Rock, the people and the circus itself... lemme be D:
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Re: I draw stuff.
« Reply #41 on: September 22, 2008, 02:28:07 AM »
The way you're doing it seems just...well....lack luster and bad.  Everything is very blobby.  Even his hands.  You have like one fold on his right arm which I dont even think would belong there.  The only thing that saves this from being a 4th grade doodle is color and background.  I paid attention to the shoe.  It looks like a blob.  I really think you should try to incorporate some minor details in you're drawings.  When people wear pants they dont just form fit 2 inches away from the leg like that.  they fold and get bent and cast shadows.  You dont need to draw every stitch of the fabric, but you need to at the very least outline some of the bigger folds.  Same with the shirt.

Also, try to focus the blood more and less in various spots.  Im sure in...w/e he was doing, the blood didnt EVENLY COAT him all around like that, know what I mean.  Have some blood spots bigger than others.  I see it starting out...kinda, but its very minimal and just makes it look like an even coating.

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Re: I draw stuff.
« Reply #42 on: September 22, 2008, 02:41:17 AM »
It does look a bit blobby, but I think that kind of adds to it a bit
But it also subtracts quite a bit from it's charm cause cute and gory don't really go good together

Also that fold in the arm doesn't really belong, cause that arms straight, if anywhere it belongs in the other arm.

And is that supposed to be a fold on his leg?
Or is it a handprint?
I honestly can't tell

Also (don't worry I'm almost done), is that heart on his chest intentional?
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Re: I draw stuff.
« Reply #43 on: September 22, 2008, 03:26:43 AM »
Don't get me wrong, I accept criticism, and agree in many parts. Folds, I tend to add them when I "think" they should go (I'm way off in details). Blood and gore does not usually mix, but believe me, according to the things I usually draw, this makes complete sense :D

About the fold in the leg, it is a handprint. Supposedly, someone was grabbing him by the leg while he was chopping other people. That theory also could work to other places where blood is not actually there (aka, the heart shaped thingy, which I didn't notice it was heart shaped. I just was erasing some minor parts of blood here and there, because, technically, if he was completely red, I would not like it at all either). Either way, now I see the other one where the character had blood in it was way better when it comes up to blood than this one :/

Now that I think about it, how come it's not until now that I'm getting criticism? I'm not used to get it, so I have evolved my style quite slowly.
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Re: I draw stuff.
« Reply #44 on: September 22, 2008, 03:43:55 AM »
No one gives criticism because it's easier to give a vague "cool" than to get bitched at and see a bunch of excuses for giving criticism.
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