My first Midi

[mrhawi]

 Hi guys, i want u to see my first mid, is the music of the last boss on castlevania Circle Of The moon, is not completed but im working on it, i accept suggestions and other things, regards =)

[fruckert]

It is very very bare
Spice it up a little, add some rhythm tracks, preferably some brass instruments

[Hell Angel]

See, this is the sort of melody that is impossible to stand on it's own. It has no easily seen rhythm in it, no sort of familiar parts repeated. This isn't even really worth showing unless you have some kind of basses or  something to keep rhythm. It needs something that we can follow.

In other words, I agree with Fruck.

[mrhawi]

 Thanks for comments, i´ve edited some of the midi, is not completed yet, but i'm working on it:

[fruckert]

The rhythm track comes in a bit too late
It's still way too boring in the beginning
Although it is quite an improvement

What I would normally do with a melody like this is have some kind of metronome track in the beginning, something that repeats the same thing every two measures, or something. Then, after two or so measures, add in a rhythm
It's all up to you, as with a melody this complex, it might make it worse having too many things in there all vying for your attention, but you still need to add some other things in there to make it not boring in the beginning