Dark World

[RPG LORD]

Do you need me to make a custom system set for this?

[Ruler of the Dark]

No, I am using pictures for the extra menus

[MrMister]

I find it easiest to use chipsets and charasets for custom menus, but it doesn't look nearly as spiffy.

[Ruler of the Dark]

I'm not going for easy, I want to make my first completed game very good.

[Ruler of the Dark]

Could somebody make this better?
Its my intro background and it just looks bad. If you can't tell, it needs an evil thing chasing people, 1 being possesed, people bowing to it, 7 mages banishing it, 7 mages guarding the seal, and some guy with a magic summoning circle. This thing needs to look like it was made by aboriginals or something ancient

[Sephiroth rocks]

It'd look better if it was carved into a rock or something (most ancient civilizations didn't have paper).

[Ruler of the Dark]

More functions now.

[Ruler of the Dark]

 Screenshots:
Intro thingy (Much thanks Nanatzia_Kuja)

[Ruler of the Dark]

My music playing system
(this is the first song you learn, the Song of Friendship)

[MrMister]

Wow, this IS starting to look like Zelda.
I think for the number of mages should be 5 so they can go in a circle and make the devil star thing.

[Ruler of the Dark]

Well, in my opinion, the only real similarity between this and zelda is the instrument stuff and some bgms. Other than that, this whole thing came out of my onw head.

[Red Giant]

Wow. Although, well done on your part for making an instrument system, that is reeeeal Zeldaish.
I'd change the instrument at least. Is the ocarina important? 'Cos mad Zelda lovers will hate you for this.

[grand_PiNpOn]

nah...i won't hate ya dude
i can say i'm a huge Zelda fan
the cool thingy is that ya have found a way to play the ocarina:D
i like that big time:D
maybe ya can make it into a tutorial if ya want to

Can i use it???
cause i'm making a Zelda game and i need the ocarina ofcource:D
pretty please

[Ruler of the Dark]

 Update on Story
In the start of the game, you are in a reactor/factory. Along with 2 other recruits of the Filinean Army and a commander, you are finding out why the energy flow is stoping. It is a broken Machine, but you discover a secret monster creation project under the reactor.....

[Ruler of the Dark]

Originally posted by grand_PiNpOn
nah...i won't hate ya dude
i can say i'm a huge Zelda fan
the cool thingy is that ya have found a way to play the ocarina:D
i like that big time:D
maybe ya can make it into a tutorial if ya want to

Can i use it???
cause i'm making a Zelda game and i need the ocarina ofcource:D
pretty please

I'm not that good at tutorials.....