- Phantasy Dreams -

[skybuddy]

The reason why im starting a newg ame is becausemy old game has lots of bugs and 1 bug is that the game wont start up. So wohoo a new game by me, and some friends. So please, have Coments on the
game and not on the title. So anyways heres the stuff.

[GLOW]Phantasy Dreams[/GLOW]

.:Story:.
 In the dark realms of kengaren, there was a temple with a source of energy. Of one person touched the power it became his. But there was a dark man who wanted that power so he went to the temple. The power  cannot be taken by a dark persopn so they seperated in 4 groups. Light, Fire, Earth, and water. they all went in random places. So the dark person went out to look for them. Now in a village, a boy now must go out and find them and bring them back to destroy the dark Dream. But it wasn't the boy's quest, it was his dream..  But everytime he woke up, he was confused. Is the dream real? Or is it just a fantasy?... So he went back to his home town [he lived somewhere else] to find out...

[skybuddy]

http://www.villagephotos.com/pubbrowse.asp?selected=918725
Go therefor more screenshots.

[Robotam]

I liked the story really much, but that screen looks alittle empty, but it's probably just for testing...

I will be watching this topic for more info and screens.

Good luck!  

[Red Mage]

About the story... What is the boy's motivation?
And... Where did the element 'wind' go?

[benosalankelley]

one screenie is'nt going to convince me.

[kAiRoU]

wind is stupid. the story here is excalent, i'm the guy who apretiates the elemants no matter wich four of the eight you use(as long as Fire and water are together and light and dark are apart) Maby the guy visits these realms and gains control over the elemants:

You gained Fire Sphere!
"Pyro Craker!" or something( i'm good at planing features) but you do waht ever you want to.

[Ryoshin]

and you guys say my story isnt original,
i dont think this one is either!

I'm glad that you have your own opinion.

i dont get why people say this is original

Who here has said this game's storyline is original? Do you think 'original' is a synonyme for 'good'?

 

[skybuddy]

Thanks for that, but please dont say " My storys so original!!!!1111oeoneonenoeone"

[Red Giant]

Um... Sorry, but, the story is just too... Empty? Maybe that's the word. It's like a big, fluffy, cliche-monster with no soul.
Just because it involves elements and has half the longevity of Zelda, that doesn't really mean anything to the core story.

And BTW: Wind isn't stupid!! Without it, we wouldn't be able to windsurf, dry washing on a line or hangglide!
And the first Sailing ships wouldn't have worked!
Think about THAT.

[kAiRoU]

*womps Red*
Okay...dose the boy have a name???

[skybuddy]

Heck thats ok. And wow.. Is there any story loknger than this :p i enjoyed writing it too. I will also post the finshed town and the ship.

[Sephiroth rocks]

Why does the main hero always live in a village? I really hate that cliché!(oops it actually appears in my game too).

[skybuddy]

Originally posted by Sephiroth rocks
Why does the main hero always live in a village? I really hate that cliché!(oops it actually appears in my game too).

He doesnt [lol] Now before oyu post read the whole story [ i know u wanna ]

[Ryoshin]

well, you yourself posted a lot of negative comments about the originality of my story, and you didn't post anything here...

The reason why I didn't post here, Skybuddy didn't say that his storyline is original. But you did. And I think your storyline isn't original, that is why I posted into your topic.

btw, i posted the story of my game in other forums too,
and i got a lot of positive comments about it.

The heck I care about other forums. Even if you got positive comments in other forums, it doesn't mean I should give you positive comments. Can't you really stand negative comments?

i do not say its super original

Really? Let's take a look at your topic:

I thought it was a real original story

so far I know that IS original.

i myself think this is one of the most cool and original story

and besides, better good stolen then bad original, right?

I disagree.

[kAiRoU]

*smack* As far as i'm concered i don't care how origanal the idea is. It seams a hell of a lot origanal to me.