uhm....

[grand_PiNpOn]

i was bored some day so i tought by myself:"Why not wright a rap???.(like it's my first:p)
so it took me long to find a subject
but i'm making a game about Zelda....ya'll know...Legend of Zelda;)

so here's a lyric for a rap of mine...it's not quite finished.
about Ocarina of Time!

i would post some more lyrics,....if ya'll like this on that is:D

He’s not from this place
He’s from another race
Just chasing the villain to knock him out
To make the darkness all scream and shout
With the mastersword in his right hand and a shield in the other
He’s searching for the brightness’s mother
The princess of the land
The princess of Hyrule
All the hero’s adventures are really dope and cool
With an earring in his ear just like me
He comes in temples where i’ll never be
Kicking the bad guy’s high-knee
They will all see that the hero of time will always
And ever be the master of the sword
And defender of the triforce
Searching for the location on his map
Mountains, sea and big gaps
The defender of the princess of Hyrule
The beauty of that girl will make you droowl
With the help of Shiek he will kick darkness his butt
And the evil will forever be shut
In the scred realm, another one like this
All thanks to the Hero of time that is.


Inspired by: Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time

well wadda ya'll think???

[SnakeIzeGambit]

u got my man the gran pinpon startin to rap
inspired by the ocarina of time but kinda whack
the ability to resist a rap spree is somethin i lack
cuz i always got somethin to say to get back
ur rhymin was a lil too on the subtle side
but thats where i come in to show u how it is through my eyes



Link, the next boy wonda
an ocarina that travels through time makes me wonda
The evil Ganondorf makes Hyrule go unda
darkness takin ova, lots of lightinin and thunda
with a ray of hope the people look to a young lad
even tho he kinda young his talents make the people glad
wit the aid of his fairy and that ocarina of time
this hero takes out Ganondorf so the sun can shine
i left out all the details cuz this is a waste of time
but i jus wanted to show u a lil sumthin of mine

 

edit: If u gonna be a rapper u need to learn to freestyle. Write sumthin on the spot and if u stop then thats the end of it. And dont jus put in words so that it rhymes cuz then its gonna suck.
Get a better rhythm so that it flows better and that will make a big difference.

[grand_PiNpOn]

WOW 0_0
well...i can freestyle a little bit....i always do it with my friends....but normally i make the beats....i can beatbox ya know:D
your a great rapper ya know:D

and uhm...srry about the other day snakeizegambit
i'm terribly sorry...ya know about that N*gga thing
i didn't wanna sound racistic or anything..it's just that i always say it to friends and the don't matter.......they call me whiteboy...it's my nickname:D
so uhm.....can we be friends???

[SnakeIzeGambit]

aight and its all good

[grand_PiNpOn]

yeah we friends,
this ain't where the story ends.
and i have ta say
he's a better rapper then 50cent
and all the time i spent wasting my life with really wack raps
the snakeize will help me outa these gaps;)

yeah but uhm...i'm Dutch so it's hard for me to rap and freestyle in English ya know.
but if i do it in Dutch i can freestyle good...i swear!
it's so that i speak Dutch so i already know words that rime.......and in English i first have to think alot.......so my English raps suck hard c*ck.

[grand_PiNpOn]

well........SnakeIze......i made another rap
just tell me what i'm doing wrong in this one ok???
Well..here goes

This is a rap about my ex-girlfriend

Firts i had doh
And i got the flow
And then you came along
But now you gotta go
Why o why do you wanna know
Well i’ll tell ya that in so-so
Well your stealing all my money
This ain’t funny stop laughing
You ain’t my honey no more
you’ve reached my core
Of madness
Madness and sadness
Now i’m a slack
but once i wuz the best
you can ask all my friends
my parents and the rest
of the people who know me
F*ck you Naomy, you don’t owne me
I keep listening to the X to the Z,
Snoop D-O-double G and the rest of
that West side family
and then i heard of friends
you were talking about me
behind my back
B*tch, give  some slack
I should watch out if i where you
Cuz, once i will find you
I’ll give ya one hard PIMP-slap
Now go outa my site, you stupid b*tch
And prepare to get f**ked up
You trick *ss snitch

[SnakeIzeGambit]

actually that was pretty good. besides the english problems but like u said ur dutch. Since u had a topic that got the fire in u to ignite the flow was way better and it didnt sound so cheesy. good job.
and bout the other one u wrote:
he said im a betta rapper then that nigga 50cent
well i would hope so cuz that niggas really bent
he a fake ***gangsta livin the high life
wit his fake *** rhymes bout borderline strife
he needs to get his mind rite and quit the game
cuz Gambit comin round so everyone remember this name
cuz once i get my label nuttin gonna be the same
ima be the next nigga wit alot of fame
ima blow up and hold up the this industry
the rap game cant continue unless they get into me


edit:im on aim and i stopped to check a message so im done lol

[grand_PiNpOn]

yo snakeIze that's dope my boy:D
are ya busy already with the label fixing and stuff like that???

[MrMister]

He coulld be the next Bow... wow... thing. I'm sorry, I know nothing about rap.

[SnakeIzeGambit]

Originally posted by grand_PiNpOn
yo snakeIze that's dope my boy:D
are ya busy already with the label fixing and stuff like that???

well me and my group are gonna be workin out the demo hopefully sumtime soon. AcquanW and me are the leaders and we jus gettin in sum more practice before we start anything real.

[grand_PiNpOn]

aha
so he's in your group 2
but uhm...if i may ask
what are ya doing on charas???
besides modifying
i mean
you sound like such a cool guy and all......why do RM2K/3
when ya can rap and all that sorta things

[SnakeIzeGambit]

well im into rpgs alot and Im gonna be goin to school for art and computer graphicing. Game makin involves computer graphics so since i love RPGs and I love art RPG maker is a great program for me.
Music is jus a side thing becuz half the time people dont make it in the industry so i keep doin my thing till i kno if im gonna have a music career.

[grand_PiNpOn]

well.....your right:D
but uhm.....i hope you and your crew will be scouted..and gonna B great rappers
and uhm....when your demo is out......make it a MP3 and post the link here
i wanna hear it

BTW what do you guys rap about???
just the usual...D & A? (Drugs 'n Alcohol)
or something different?

[SnakeIzeGambit]

we rap bout anything. were more of the spur of the moment rappers. once we think of it we rap bout it