GAIA Legacy of Alencia

[Darwin]

I have just finished my demo and i will send it to you by msn if you want to try it

[Red Giant]

Hrm, couldnt you host it somewhere? Like Ripway?

Oh, and I'll take one please.

[Darwin]

I already tried 250.com and geocties, if you can upload it somewhere for me it would be pretty nice

btw i need your msn if you want me to send it to you Red

[Serano65]

freewebs.com works and could i try the demo

[Ryoshin]

With Freewebs, you can download files slow as hell.

[Darwin]

I finally found a good host, here is the link

http://home.ripway.com/2004-10/191344/GAIA.rar

Hope you like it

[benosalankelley]

i'll let you know, how good it is.

update edit: um, you should at least make the first boss a little easier, because, just because, i thought i got the first boss in my hands. but no. Also, you should try to make a better intro, just was'nt enough, sorry, it was not that super cool, but it was a starter, but it is interesting game.

[Darwin]

The boss is already made easier now, and the introduction will come very soon after the battle with the batwolf

[Draven]

I stopped playing in the first boss, it is too hard. This game didn't interest me, and it seriously needs some work.

[Darwin]

Really? then give me some constructive critic so i can make it better instead of just hearing that it sucks btw the first boss has been made alot easier en the newest version ( I got several complaints about him being too strong, )

[Draven]

Ok...

1. The intro isn't very interesting. What about making a little bit longer dialogue and some cool music? The intro is the thing that makes people play your game so you should make it a little bit better. But do it in your way, don't take my advice as an order.

2. Don't mix ripped and original graphics. That demon thing was ripped, I'm sure of it. It looked quite bad in a RTP background. Also, the character was almost a giant compared to the demon.

3. Use correct grammar. This disturbed me. Please, remember that 'i' ('me') is written as I, always.

Hope these helped.  

[Serano65]

I wouldn't say that the intro make pepole want to play your game but it does help bring people into your world. and the only thing I will say about the first boss is that you have to look at it as part of your intro more then some boss filling in space. meaning if it's the guy who sent it after you is really powerful keep it hard but make it like you got away before the beast could deliver it's finally blow then you can bring it back latter on only then your much stronger. and you can have anytype of monsters you like so long as they are not too off from the rest of you things.

[Draven]

Originally posted by Serano65
I wouldn't say that the intro make pepole want to play your game but it does help bring people into your world.

Yeah, intro should make the first impression¨.

[Darwin]

Okay thnax for the info about the I's, Well it is kinda important that The hero beats the monster ( this have influence on the thing happening after that ) so i will probaly put the wait time ( the 2 weeks ) down to 1 or 2 days so it's clerly for everyone that the man hasn't got all his powers back yet, but thank you very much for helping me

[Xen]

Intro need work Darwin but good game...
Like the music too!