Raps?

[Revolution911]

This is not a thread to say that "rap sux" or "metal sux". just post what u write. heres a quick on of mine

The reality of the ghetto seem to break some niggas.
Got ppl thinkin we ignorant, lets change our figure,
Put that knife down, throw away that gat
Lets show em we aint fools, earn our respect back.
A hungry man will do whatever it takes,
to earn a quick buck, to get some food on his plate.
The reality is that we had no choice.
We had a mother who raised 2 girls and 1 boy.
W/ nuttin to show for it but a welfare check.
Livin like that, no wonder he got that gat

[Red Giant]

This really belongs in Creative Arts.

[Revolution911]

er....i guess so....sorry. my bad

[Weregnome]

Rev u rock m8. How can ya just come up with somethin like that off ya head?

[Xen]

That's the way of the rapper....
It amazes me too...

[Flamer]

pretty good! I love Your Raps

[Sarg]

You need some music to go with those letters. They are pretty good!

[Revolution911]

no one else writes? it dont gotta be a rap...a poem? a song?

btw, thx for the comments

[Revolution911]

Seems like to be in it the ppl think ya gotta be a gangsta
If you aint packin guns you a "wanksta"?
Dont get me wrong tho, dont start takin ****,
Strenght is power but so is knowledge jus dont be stupid with it,

small.....cmon ppl no raps?

[carmen]

alil song I wrote a year ago.

                             

Prom Night

 She's layed out
 Upon the bed
She stayed out
But now shes dead


Tell me why this had to be
Tell me why she couldn't see

tell me why she had to
turn her eyes from me
Hide away from me
   

She stayed out
Just like she said
She stayed out
and now shes dead

Tell me why this had to be
Tell me why she couldn't see
tell me why she had to
turn her eyes from me
turn away from me

Turn, turn, turn, turn turn

Turn away from me.

[SnakeIzeGambit]

nuttin big

I stay true to the game of the rap industry
so take a clue and stop tryin to spit on me
step off ur high horse cuz its pissin me off
we all one people if u disagree its ur loss
we may not be one voice but we can be one song
harmonizing all together makes it that much more strong
instead of hatred in our lives jus look to the skies
forget the people and their lies who stay in disguise
keep the peace close to home so u dont break the ties
if u dont agree with my theory then take a look thru my eyes.

[SnakeIzeGambit]

(sorry for the double)

little 4-liner lol

reppin Snake-Ize is the way i do it
i can rap bout basically anything, im so d*mn fluent
i dont care what ya'll say cuz when it gets down to it
im doin sumthin u cant do so just lose it.

[Revolution911]

this one bout a girl

you just another piece of *** to him, he cant see
he takes advantage of ur innocence, u gotta break free
he dont see what i see in you, nah your more than that
your better than him,it aint worth it, forget this cat
u have to understand ma, are you that blind?
he been playin you from the start, look through my eyes,
he got u on a chain, dont be his stupid puppet
he gonna leave you for dead later on, he lovin it,
i aint tryin to keep you for my self, that'd be selfish
i just want you to see he aint nuthin, thas all i wish
ive seen what he did to other chicks, left em cryin
and when he tells u he luv u, u should know hes lyin
i know you see it to, dont even try to deny it,
just tell him where to go,tell him whats what, just try it
he gotta understand not all women are fools,
he sees em all as sluts, just trashy worthless tools.
leave him behind ma, go on, trash this cat
cuz to him u just another piece of *** ma, ur more than that

EDIT: those are hot raps snake

[SnakeIzeGambit]

thnx even tho they were nuttin big
 d*mn i have nuttin to write about and if i was to write bout my everyday life people here would prolly start flaming talking about "oo see he's a gangster blah blah blah raps bad" so im done for the night

[Revolution911]

Another body found on these streets,
the home of the killers, cold concrete,
a clouded sky up above my head,
a crow makin noise which means anotha nigga dead,
was it really worth it tho? to kill?
for what respect? that how u earn it? how u prove u real?
s*it like that will throw dirt on our names
as if we dont already gotta live our life in shame
a single mother starvin herself
it really hurt watchin cuz i couldent help,
a crackfiend roamin the streets,
to get some drugs, goin to whatever feet
a "gangsta" who just killed a father of 3
now he thnk he real for destroyin a familys unity
a dealer right at the end of the block
ruinin kids lifes by sellin em rocks
funny how ppl survive through all of this s*it,
funny that what i told ya aint even half of it