Cryptic Legands

[Ace of Spades]

I'm sorry dude, but this game is not really that great. I mean, where's the plot? Is there any story line at all? Do you do anything besides walk around on grass platforms and go through holes that when you get to the end of the path, it transports you right back to where you were before? No offense, but if you spent years on this game just to get a demo, you need to learn a lot more about rpg maker. I know the graphics are rtp, mostly, and your mapping skills need some work, but that's not why I don't like this game. There's just no gameplay or any plot. What do you do? Why are you there. Nothing. I'm sorry if I've made you mad, I don't like to criticize, and I'm not trying to be mean, but you need to give this game a storyline because without that, this isn't really a game. I don't want to totally demoralize you, but give this game a lot more work and thought, and then you could work on the graphics too. Some people are really into having good graphics in games, though I'm more for gameplay, I'm not the only one who is going to play your game. So put more work into it, give it a good story, and then show it to us again. Good luck!

[blade_270]

I actually originally finished it, but.... my computer crashed before I could get it up. I only found my old version and I know it sucks. the thing is.... I can't stick to plots. It's just something i'm not good at. sorry.

[Flux]

Heard about it through GD hes working on darkend dawn with me

It's about Kanasu he's found after falling from a cliff and has to save the world from his best friend gone bad. hes summining all the powes of gia and forcing them in to a ball then shattering them to every part of the earth. then igniting them  to destroy the world


Darkened Dawn coming 12/23/05

[SonicChaos7]

If you can't stick to plots, make a game that has several plots. Like a game that goes through many different settings. Odd, but it's quite fun.

[blade_270]

I kinda did that before, but it ended up like subquest the game. It was no fun at all. Plus, I also was experimenting with offline mass multiplayer simulators. but only on XP. seemed to work pretty well. Me and flux are going to make a game togeether. I've trashed the cryptic series, though I am considering that simulator again. even though it's a tad big.