Mythic Knights

[lan-the phoenix holder]

Originally posted by RegalPhantom
Sorry to say, but this ain't that original.  I felt like I was reading another Final Fantasy 5. Yet another ancient evil. Now since I care too much to let you make a game no one will miss, I will ask you some constructive questions in order to get the most out of this game and make it better hopefully.

First of all, does Mythic Lord have a name?  No one names their son Mythic Lord.  And certainly no one will take anyone named Mythic Lord seriously.  I suggest you give him a name.  If you have trouble doing that, I will help you. If you want him to be nameless, I'll be fine with that too.  But keep in mind that, realistically, Mythic Lord is not a name, it's a rank.  Just some advice to help further your game.

Now, most of your characters are teenagers or around that age.  With such little fighting experience, it makes little sense for them to be able to go toe to toe with an evil that has so much fighting experience that he kills off a whole tribe.  Try to give more explanation to as how people with so little years in their life would be able to beat Mythic Lord and someone that has been fighting for fifty years can't?

Your names could also use some livening up.  Instead of Lan, why not Lance or Lancaius or Lanarkin?  Instead of Yang, why not Shu-yang or Yangin?  If it's not too much of a problem, it'd be nice to see some more neat looking names.

Anyways, I think the spirit armor could be a very great idea if you pulled it off well enough.  If you make that into elementals, you could add extra strategy into your game.

Further elaborate on the character if at all possible.  I mean, you're not simply Lan, a male born on November 12th, 1992.  You're Lan, a male born on November 12th, 1992, an RPG creator, and more.  Add little details like that to your characters, and I'll help you further from there.

If I seem a little harsh, I'm not trying to be.  I simply want to see that your RPG can be one that'll at least earn a decent score.

first of all i don't the names for Lan and my friends made some of them up and they will be mad if it was changed so i don't like u and the Mythic Lord does have a name but no one knows u jerk & these kids r welled trained since they were like 5 .

[lan-the phoenix holder]

Originally posted by Sqoad
Cool! When will a demo be released? I'm getting impatient(If that how you spell it) XD

soon my friend soon

[RegalPhantom]

Why are you being so rude?  I try to help you, and this is what I get in return.  Thanks. I appreciate it.

[lan-the phoenix holder]

Originally posted by RegalPhantom
Why are you being so rude?  I try to help you, and this is what I get in return.  Thanks. I appreciate it.

not really and thanx bout what

[RegalPhantom]

No really. You say you want help, but you're turning it away whenever I tried to help you.

Again. Thanks.

[Sqoad]

 

First of all, does Mythic Lord have a name? No one names their son Mythic Lord. And certainly no one will take anyone named Mythic Lord seriously. I suggest you give him a name. If you have trouble doing that, I will help you. If you want him to be nameless, I'll be fine with that too. But keep in mind that, realistically, Mythic Lord is not a name, it's a rank. Just some advice to help further your game.

Y'know! I don't want to start a fight but a character must not always have a name... Like on "Sword of Mana", Dark Lord. It's a title. Ever played fable? People call you by your title (Like Avatar, Dabre or Hood) And I think that is pretty good actually XD So that question wasn't really needed...

 

Your names could also use some livening up. Instead of Lan, why not Lance or Lancaius or Lanarkin? Instead of Yang, why not Shu-yang or Yangin? If it's not too much of a problem, it'd be nice to see some more neat looking names.

Sorry for answering but it's quite obvius that it's like this= It very original to name a character with a cool name. How would the world look like if everyone had a cool name? It wouldn't be cool anymore! Lan is a very good name and makes since because Lan might be a normal guy at the beggining. And it's VERY rare to name your son Lance or Lancaius(Unless you're a game freak)

If this massage is only outting up a fight I'll delete it and say sorry

[Rune_of_Punishment]

He means about the whole situation. It's pathetic when someone tries to help you, but you reject it because it doesn't follow your "plan". Why toast your buns over something like that? He actually wants your game to be good, unlike many of the other users who post in here. The majority of the people who post in this topic just say, "Oh man! This is great! Can't wait for the demo! K thx bai!" Will that help you as a game maker? I hope not and I know it won't. I can't believe you would shun help just to appease your friends.

[lan-the phoenix holder]

Originally posted by RegalPhantom
No really. You say you want help, but you're turning it away whenever I tried to help you.

Again. Thanks.

bout what u r not really helping just with the name 4 the planet

[lan-the phoenix holder]

Originally posted by Rune_of_Punishment
He means about the whole situation. It's pathetic when someone tries to help you, but you reject it because it doesn't follow your "plan". Why toast your buns over something like that? He actually wants your game to be good, unlike many of the other users who post in here. The majority of the people who post in this topic just say, "Oh man! This is great! Can't wait for the demo! K thx bai!" Will that help you as a game maker? I hope not and I know it won't. I can't believe you would shun help just to appease your friends.

i am not doing that i am just making my game and i know that not every one will like it

[RegalPhantom]

If you would answer the questions directly, it would help you.  Trust me, I've been doing this long enough to know that the way to any solid RPG is to answer the questions that people give you.  If you can't tell the answers to me, you don't have to, but it's better for your sake if you do since it'll make the scope of your RPG bigger and of course, more enjoyable.

Of course, if you don't want that then just simply say it.

Anyways, name for your planet.

Aramak

Seirus

Senechia

Tors

Kailas

Artoma

Centrinius

Norbersk

If any of those help, feel free to take them while I come up with more ideas.

[lan-the phoenix holder]

Originally posted by RegalPhantom
If you would answer the questions directly, it would help you.  Trust me, I've been doing this long enough to know that the way to any solid RPG is to answer the questions that people give you.  If you can't tell the answers to me, you don't have to, but it's better for your sake if you do since it'll make the scope of your RPG bigger and of course, more enjoyable.

Of course, if you don't want that then just simply say it.

Anyways, name for your planet.

Aramak

Seirus

Senechia

Tors

Kailas

Artoma

Centrinius

Norbersk

If any of those help, feel free to take them while I come up with more ideas.

thanx for the names like i said i have not gone over the new name for the planet so i will soon if it is the last thing i do

[Rune_of_Punishment]

Hey Lan, since you're so determined, I would like to say that you should upload your game onto Gaming World. That way a large audience will get to play it.

[Sqoad]

The majority of the people who post in this topic just say, "Oh man! This is great! Can't wait for the demo! K thx bai!"

Probably because we MEAN it!

[Rune_of_Punishment]

Whether your words mean anything is beside the point I'm trying to make. What I'm saying is is that no one is really helping. Just saying, "Oh man! This is great! Can't wait for the demo! K thx bai!" isn't helping.

[Sqoad]

Do you suggest to keep picking on him? That is to treat a person badly. As they say: "Treat someone the way you want to be treated"