Ruined Faith

[PikaTira]

[GLOW]Basic Summary[/GLOW]

Ruined Faith is a game that takes place on the planet called Meni.

Once the land was nothing but sorrow until four knights, known as the Hikyuu Knights, went to stand against any evil including the she devil, Kijo. During the fight, three of the knight were cowards and ran away while the other one knight stayed and fought the demon and was victorious but the victory cost him his life. The six kingdoms owned the single warrior their lives and honored him by put a statue of him in every castle. The other three fighters were branded the name cowards and they disappear forever.

Ten years later, the daughter of the mighty knight is faced with trouble and nasty nations. Her friends and she must uncover a deep secret hidden by kingdoms and allies.


 [GLOW]Charaters[/GLOW]

1. Amuraa Kokuhaku
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Position in Society: Daughter of the Famous Hikyuu Knight
Way of Learning: Number of battles
Type of Magic: Arcada (Dark arts)

Bio: With her mother death right after Amuraa's birth, Amuraa lived with her father, Kenki, and was train by him until his death, at the age of 10. After her father’s death, Amuraa was force to rely on herself until, she meet her two best friends, Kibin and Yasha. With their help Amuraa became head guardian for a temple in a poor village.  


2. Kibin Danshigakuse
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Position in Society: Middle-class Scholar  
Way of Learning: Books
Type of Magic: Najimu (Summons)

Bio: Kibin lives with his parents in the kingdom until he was 7. At the age of 7, he was sent away to a special school. After being expelled at the age 10, for touching the girls he was sent home. On the way home he was attack. Thanks to Amuraa he survived. As a thank you gift he pledge his friendship to her. With her help and Yasha’s help he passed the school at the age of 15. Now, he serves as a scholar for the kingdom.


3. Yasha Miyasama
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Position in Society: Next in line heir to the throne (Princess)
Way of Learning: Clinic training
Type of Magic: Onkei (Healing magic)

Bio: As only princess of the kingdom, Bun’ya, Yasha, spend most of her time as a spoiled child. After meeting Amuraa and Kibin, then sending them on a suicide mission, Yasha finally found out how much of a little monster she was. After saving Amuraa and Kibin, she became friends with both of them and helped them with anything they needed.


4. Naito Bishounen
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Position in Society:  Run of the mill Paladin
Way of Learning: None yet (Can't decide, need help)
Type of Magic: Bouei (Holy magic)

Bio: Naito was born in to a paladin clan who has a strict rule against disobedience. After defy a law he was kick out of the clan until he could prove he was strong enough to come back. Naito set on a journey to prove he was strong enough by becoming a better knight then Kenki.


5. Yoi Ookami
Age: 21 (human years) 147 (Wolflean years)
Gender: Male
Position in Society: A wolflean demon
Way of Learning: absorption
Type of Magic: Douka (Blue magic)

Bio: At the age of 11, Yoi was kick out of the wolflean pack for refusing to kill a human. With him being a wolflean, it was hard for Yoi to find work and get food with a scream or two. He wanders around the world so no demon hunter can kill him.


6. Gaki Otohime
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Position in Society: Last in line of the throne (Princess)
Way of Learning: None yet (Also can't decide, need help)
Type of Magic: Noroi (Curse magic)

Bio: Just like Yasha, Gaki is a princess of a small southern kingdom, Mazushii. However, Gaki has 5 older siblings. With the role of princess stuck in her head, Gaki is a very unpleasant child. Even with her kingdom being as poor as it is, and slowly being overthrown by a rebellion, she is still as spoiled as ever.


7. Tooku Tennyuusei
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Position in Society:  Criminal on the run
Way of Learning: Digging
Type of Magic: Sahara (Sand magic)

Bio:  Tooku is a sand slayer for the desert continent, Sabure. Once he was famous and well known though out the land the village elder of his love’s village was slaughter. Being in the wrong place at the wrong time, Tooku was called the murderer and taken to jail. With the help of his friend and love he escapes the prison and runs to the main land country, Bun'ya, to avoid the law of the desert.


8. Ougi Sashiashi
Age: Unknown
Gender: Unknown
Position in Society: Unrealized ninja/assassin
Way of Learning: Dojo masters
Type of Magic: Ninjutsu

Bio: Nothing is known about this charater. Ougi is a mystirous person.


 [GLOW]Features[/GLOW]
Day and night system
Calander system - (hopefully)
Change charater system
Character special trait
and more

 [GLOW]Mini-games[/GLOW]
Digging
[STRIKE]Moogle hide and seek[/STRIKE]
Slaying compettions  
Riddle house
and much more

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So, what do you think???

[Xen]

It sounds alright.
I wanna see this finished.
But, the story you have doesn't explain anything...
Is that all you have so far?

[MrMister]

Moogles? Way to ruin your game.
Personally the story sounds old, boring and drab.
Maybe not having 19 year old heroes would differentiate your game from the millions of others.

[SaiKar]

Yeah, the moogles are a strike against it, but overall it sounds like you have given this a good deal of thought. Sounds pretty interesting. Keep us updated.

[Red Giant]

And you seem to be confused about your game's name. In the title it says "Ruined Faith", and in the post it says "Ruined Hope".

[PikaTira]

That's my bad. The game is called Ruined Faith. That was a typo. I think your right about the moogle thing. See my friend is helping my with some ideas for mini games or weapons. A she suggested a hide and seek game.

It's just a summary. I have most of the plot made but I'm not going to tell.

BTW the reason I choose those ages for most of the main characters is because 18-20 years old you are no longer a child but a young adult. The characters are too mature to be 14 or 15 and too silly to be any older.

 [GLOW]UPDATE[/GLOW]

Main Characters are done. However, only one has poses.