Pics of The lost life of Simon

[maxine]

     

[ZeroKirbyX]

They look okay, but you could just post 'em in the game thread.

[maxine]

Sry Kirby ill work on the game... hehe i can get why you only gave me an ok ive only had the program 4 two weeks hehe.... But ill post more at the game forum soon thx !

[blackskullwarlock]

They look okay. The town is rather empty...no wait, the town is very empty. The battle screen is good but the monster is a bit weird. The last screenshot is okay too.

You got the program 2 weeks ago so you have a lot to learn...

[maxine]

ye heheh the town isnt finnished. its just the beginning of the game. And the monster looks bad i know but i had too make a battle screen. It aint the monster its gonna be

[DragonBlaze]

Tip of advice, if something isn't finished, don't post a screen of it Unless of course you need suggestions on how to finish it.

That being said, like the others said, the town is too empty. Try adding trees, grass, a well, some dirt, a bench or two, and other stuff you would find in a town to make the map more lively. If it still seems empty, simply make the map smaller.

The battle is decent, the bad guy seems a bit odd, but it's graphics match the hero sprites, so I have nothing against it.

The castle screen isn't bad, its rtp, but I won't hold that against you since you've only been working with rm2k for two weeks

Your maps are better than mine when I only had rm2k for two weeks, just work at it and you'll get better

[maxine]

thanks alot... i will create my first game much through rtp...... bad news but true news

[GhostClown]

Well, first games usually are RTP. So no biggie.

[BlackIceAdept]

mines not rtp except the charasets which are "nice rtp"...

[maxine]

well ye... Since i think u have had the program pretty much longer than me... i think i work good on it for being my first attempt.

[True Evil]

They look great for someones first game! My first game had crappy maps...

[maxine]

Thank you. I will put up more pics when i ahve come so far in the game ive stop used RTP. Then the pics will be more of an interest. Cheers!

[Moosetroop11]

With the town, here's what I always say: To make it realistic, imagine why it's there.

In a town, there are usually many houses closer together to save space. Thare are hardly ever large open areas of pavement.

There has to be enough houses for the people! Where do they sleep at night?

There woudn't be little ponds between houses. There might, however, be a canal, which you could work into the map...

You don't get tiny patches of crops. Make a bigger one, perhaps with a path running through it

Market stalls?

To make your maps more interesting, use this charset:
(I didn't make it, byt he way. I don't know who did)

[maxine]

thanks ill use it.... But people will know why it aint a town when they play... The meaning is that the king is selfish and the town is only built for him. That i think shall be an pretty good answer too my town