Sonic Adventure - The Emerald Ring

[Wildy]

im making a sonic fangame
i hope this is the first game that i finish thats actually well planned story (not really but its the best ive made up on my own)

the story is complicated to me and ill tell u later (its long)
Basically, its about Sonic and his friends [GLOW]vs.[/GLOW]  Metal form of his friends(Metal Sonic, Metal Knuckles, etc.) [GLOW]vs.[/GLOW]  Sonic and friends's Aruma beings (Sonic and his friends from other dimensions....yes dimensions not 1 dimension)

they all fight for something called the Sapphire Ring aka. "The Almighty Ring"(optional name) to help create the Emerald Ring(a fusion of the Ring and the master emerald) which can grant power that can almost surpass a god

[Snake Eater]

Sounds lame.

[VulcanRaven336]

I have to agree with Snake, pretty lame.
Try something more original.

[Wildy]

maybe ur right
but i did so much and the story is more complex than what i put

ill just finish it private until i think its good

thnx for being honest but i dont handle rejection well

[Wildy]

if any can help does any1 have any resources for sonic

i was gonna ask ppl if they can make up three main charaters for my game but since snake says

Sounds lame.

then i have to make some up unless u wanna try

[Snake Eater]

Maybe if you gave us more info, it wouldn't be lame. Sorry about hurting your feelings though.

[Wildy]

i bet its lame anyway cause my cousin wanted to a sonic game badly so its a childish story

plus i still need three main characters

but ill put it in my next post but [GLOW]Its Long[/GLOW] just for an intro

[Wildy]

P.S. if u want to say any ridiculment or anything negative say it now

[GhostClown]

Originally posted by Wildy
P.S. if u want to say any ridiculment or anything negative say it now

Don't double post.

[Wildy]

sry for the double post
here's the intro to the game
be honest cause ur opinion can effect this game

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After the incident with Metal Sonic (Sonic Heroes), Dr.Eggman is left with no ideas to defeat Sonic. Then he realizes that Metal Sonic would have nearly taken over the earth as the Supreme Overlord. If Eggman managed to get to make more creations like Metal Sonic and repair and upgrade his recent failed creation Metal Knuckles (Sonic Advance) to destroy them all. But the problem was he lost the information he used to make Metal Sonic and the blueprints he used to make Metal Knuckles was inferior to Metal Sonic. Eggman knew he had to find Metal Sonic for his new project.
 Shadow and Omega knew how the power of Metal Sonic can not be awakened again but both of them couldn’t help but feel sorry for him as if he was a lost brother. They decide to break in a science research center and put Metal Sonic in a space pod that’s meant to preserve any person. Omega over-rides the system to preserve metal and send Metal Sonic to Space Colony Ark.
Eggman soon hears of the attack on the science center and takes his rocket to Space Colony Ark. He finds Metal Sonic in his pod with a strange circular box next to it. The minute Eggman tried to reach for it, Metal Sonic smashed through the pod and took the box. When Metal Sonic had it engulfed in his hands he instantly reboots himself but afterwards he seemed unsure of his surroundings and confused. Eggman took the opportunity as an advantage to trick Metal Sonic to work for him for his project. Eggman found it unusual how Metal Sonic knew a lot about something called the Rune Ring. Metal Sonic managed to convince Eggman to work at his project in the abandoned space colony.
It has been a year since that day. Sonic and his friends, Tails, Amy, Cheese and Cream all enjoy their vacation at Station Squares beach until Tails sees 5 pods fall from the sky. Four of them hit Station Square, and one hits the beach’s ocean. Something was creeping towards them under the water. Out of the ocean was Knuckles. The others were relieved to see him until Sonic noticed his grin and yellow eyes. Knuckles eyes were usually purple. Cheese went to Knuckles to give him a hug when he noticed he was cold and solid like a machine. Sonic springs at him just to see transform into the Metal Knuckles he knew in the past. Sonic ends up being punched in the face on the ground, but what went through Sonic’s mind was if that pod that hit the ocean was Metal Knuckles, then what about the other four that hit the city.

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there happy now

[Rune_of_Punishment]

That sounds a little... sardonic. Your last sentence, I mean. It sounded a little rude.

[Wildy]

yeah i was an *** then but its only caause i warned ppl that it was long and no one listened to me

but wat do u think of the story

[Rune_of_Punishment]

It's not so bad for a Sonic story, but making a sequel to Sonic Heroes, is not something I particularly would do. This is just a suggestion, but I think it would be better to make a fresh Sonic game, if you were to make one. Purely opinion. If you wish to continue, continue.

[Ace of Spades]

It's actually not that bad. But, IMO, don't put Cream and Cheese in there. They suck. Stick with the main characters, put a lot of thought in the story, and it might turn out pretty well. Good luck.

[GhostClown]

Actually, true, like Sonic said: Make a fresh story, it's always best (I.E Ghost Babel and Metal Gear Ac!d) They use the same characters etc, but a totally different storyline, which does not follow the main story line, so it's un-effected.