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[Bobb]

Hey, I have an idea for an RPG, but I need your opinion on the story. I also need a name.

Story:  A child was born with unimaginable powers. This has happened before. The last time it happened, the child used his power on riches and other evil things. His face was torn off. Now, the present time, another kid is born with powers. He talks about how he will save the world, but finds out that evil is more powerful than good. He uses his powers for bad now. Will the world crumble due to his powers or will he end up like the last one?

That's kind of the story line.

Characters:
Name: Zeza
Weapon: Long Sword (like Sephiroth's in FF7)
Gender: Male
Bio: Zeza is the main character in the game. He has powers that he uses for evil. Zeza wants to take over the world.

Name: Orex
Weapon: Fists
Gender: Male
Bio: Orex is the previous kid that had powers. After being revived by Zeza, this mage teams up with Zeza to take over the world.

Name: Haru
Weapon: HUGE Axe
Gender: Male
Bio: Haru is a boy that Zeza and Orex meet on their travels. He is skilled with the axe. He is a thief.

Name: Durane
Weapon: Spear
Gender: Male
Bio: Durane tries to mug Haru in his sleep. Zeza and Orex take him down and he befriends Zeza, Orex, and Haru and follows them.

Name: Shiko
Weapon: Staff
Gender: Female
Bio: Shiko is a white mage. She uses her powers only for members of her clan, which are thieves. She begins to hang out with Zeza and becomes friends with Zeza.

Name: Gikan
Weapon: Daggers
Gender: Male
Bio: Gikan is a childhood friend of Durane. They used to battle each other with sticks and twigs. They both became thieves. They ended up leaving each other. He also begins to follow the gang.

Name: Sesome
Weapon: Bow
Gender: Female
Bio: Sesome is a ninja who is told to kill Zeza and his friends. As she follows them she realizes that Haru and Shiko are nice and if they are hanging out with Zeza he must be cool too.


That's all for now! Tell me if it is a good idea and if you have any ideas for the name of it, that would be great. Thanks again.

[lan-the phoenix holder]

then who is the hero

[shinotebasiiackh]

The "every

• amount of time" is very overused.

[Bobb]

Ian-the phoenix holder:The hero is Zeza, he's just evil.

Shinotebasiiackh: I'll try to fix that. Thanks!

[Ace of Spades]

Doesn't look too bad. Just be sure to work hard at it and it should turn out ok. And yeah, the every

• amount of time is overused. Definately change that. Good luck.

[Bobb]

Thanks, Ace! Yeah, I thought I'd post a screen shot, but don't get me wrong I'm not this far i just made the battle because it is gonna happen later. Here it is I made the Battle Charas from a template. So there custom...kind of. Tell me if I should change anything.

EDIT: Yeah I just realized that the characters are out of order according to the facsets. I posted the wrong picture, but it would really be the guy with the sword, then the guy with the cloak, and then the girl.  These characters are Zeza, Orex, Yayia, then the monster is gonna be Durane after the battle.

[GhostClown]

Hm, your graphics seem to match up pretty well, all expect the faces, they are a bit mis-matched. Good luck to you.

[Bobb]

Ghostclown, when you say mis-matched do you mean they need to be different characters or I just need to rearrange them. I know there not arranged right I posted the wrong picture. Thanks anyway!

[Bobb]

Sorry for the double post, but I fixed the screen shot so the chracters line up. Oh, and would someone try to make a battle chara for Yayia, the girl, I can't get it to look right. I need her with these clothes and long hair. Thanks!

[Tomi]

Hey, not bad.  Change the 1000 years thing and you should be able to make a good game.  Good luck!

[Scarface Larry]

Once again, I've got to agree with the most of people with the "every 1000 years..." thing. But I do like the idea of the main charactor being EVIL! Did you make the battle charsets with the charas generator? I think GhostClown means that some of the faces don't match the charactors, like the girl's face seems a bit off from the battlechar. Also I think you should throw in a hero who tries to stop them at every turn and also should have some trait that's his\her own, like being clumsy, or obnoxious. Looks good, are you going to stick with the DBS and CBS? If you arn't then I could help with them, but if you are that's okay as well. Looks good, keep on RPGMakinging.

[MrMister]

He didn't mean lined up wrong, he meant the faces are drawn in different styles from each other.

[Bobb]

No. I made that from a template from the generater, but I did the clothes. I might change the style of them though. I'm starting to use the facemaker pl for faces, but I'll need someone to make them fit the sizefor the game. First I need to make them.

[shinotebasiiackh]

Take style X. Style X is a differant than Style Y.

Assume that all of your faces is supposed to be Style X. Some of your faces look like Style X, while some of them look like style Y.

He's not talking about your relation between your chars and faces. He's talking about how your faces look, period. It's like two differant styles of manga in the same book.

[Bobb]

Yeah, I'm doing my battle graphics differently. I'll show you them when I get home.