Corruption

[Pythis]

This is a Game I thought up for a month now, The plot is complete, I have A screen of the beginning of the intro just to show what Pythiros looks like. Sadly the characters I had written down were erased because I didnt save them and my computer just suddenly shut down so I can tell you the plot and a screen. Here it is!
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At times the world is a mystery to all who inhabit it. People wonder how Earth has become the way it is so often it is in the textbooks taught at Schools. Earth is a very strange place to all, It is a corrupted place, where perhaps nothing is fair...anymore. For as long as Mankind could know Earth was in it's worse condition. Crimes were everywhere you could hardly go anywhere without news of a theft or murder. However Earth wasn't always like this. When a greedy man named Pythiros ran for mayor in a small town by the coast and won the world went downhill from there. Soon Pythiros became a tyrant. He conquered and dominated anything worth doing so. He was clever also any plot against him to overthrow him was found out and the plotters hung. Regardless of this, Talin, A man from a small Village wishes to take on Pythiros to restore the world to it's former glory. Many have tried, all have failed. Right now, it seems as though Talin, the worlds last spark of hope is dying before it was even lit.
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I felt like posting this now so I didn't forget later. This is why I didn't wait to retype those long Character descriptions. In the attachment is the screen, Enjoy.

~Corruption~

[Greeny341]

Sounds like a simple but nice idea.
The screenshot looks pretty good too, nice mapping with the house.
Can't really say much for now but i'm looking forward to the finished product!

[Hell Angel]

Sorry, but Greeny is wrong, your mapping skills need alot of work.

But, the story is pretty good. ^_^ Good luck, and practice mapping.

[Pythis]

Meh I know it sucks. Ive always sucked at it I guess I'll try again.

[ipoopedontheroof]

Wow, sorry, but this is so overused! The whole its-armageddon-so-lets-go-save-the-world-from-its-doom-by-defeating-the-evil-tyrant-guy genre is getting annoying.


All of these stories seem to have a line like this (like yours):

    "Since it began the world has been filled with crime and hate, and all innocence has been lost..."

  ...Or some cheesy line like that really belongs in an Arnold Schwarzennager movie.

   And one last thing. Why are all of these dumb games/movies all named in one word ending with "tion"? Like:

Corruption
Intervention
Salvation
Interruption
Infestation
Aggrevation



 How stupid!

[ipoopedontheroof]

Oh yeah, btw.... Happy Birthday.

[Hell Angel]

Originally posted by ipoopedontheroof
Oh yeah, btw.... Happy Birthday.

XD

Meh, the reason it's over used is because it is a good game story line, people just have to add their own twist to it...

[dragon11137]

Originally posted by ipoopedontheroof
Oh yeah, btw.... Happy Birthday.

that was a reely nice way to say happy birthday...
and his mapping isnt reely that bad exept for the top part of the right wall (there should be soemthing there)

[ipoopedontheroof]

Yeah, I know that people might think that they add something new, but it is so repeated. But you have to admit that the name thing is true to the fullest extent.

[Hell Angel]

Dragon, no, there are more than that, it's plain, the dressers and items against the wall aren't close enough to the wall, and things look crouded by the wall to the right.


The roof guy, yeah, I guess.

[Meiscool-2]

If you put the dressers and stuff closer to the wall, like one more square, it would look more realistic.

And, I kinda like the clicheness of the plot. I mean, EVERY clasic 2D sytle rpg has something like this anyways. But, then again, this is an ABS right? So, because it's ABS, you can diffenently add more story, but it's harder to add as many twists.

[Pythis]

yea this is ABS I'm gonna attempt Tales of Symphonia Style one. Right now I'm basically working with the ABS. ABout the Plot, It may be cliche but does that mean the game is bad? No. Heres ho wI think of it. You are crefting a clay model you start as a lumpof clay right? Everyone does. But you can mold it into your own original model, just as I can mold the storyline at my will. Things may appear as they are written as first but eheheh you'll see. Anyway I think I'm gonna start on the TOS thing.

[ZeroKirbyX]

Originally posted by ipoopedontheroof
Yeah, I know that people might think that they add something new, but it is so repeated. But you have to admit that the name thing is true to the fullest extent.

This from mr "I have a dancing banana av like 300,000,000 other people"?

Anyway, there is a difference between a full map and a cluttered map. Yours is on the clutter side. But the story is not "OMFG ITS TEH ARMAGEDDEN!!!!!". I personally like the idea of a tyrant who 'legally' climbs to power. Now if it was he nukes the pres and becomes ruler... then it would suck. Nice idea.

[dragon11137]

Originally posted by Hell Angel
Dragon, no, there are more than that, it's plain, the dressers and items against the wall aren't close enough to the wall, and things look crouded by the wall to the right.


The roof guy, yeah, I guess.

oh woops i should reely take more time to look at things^^
ya but hes better at maping then i was when i started lol :p

[Greeny341]

I guess the items could be moved a bit to the left, I always feel like you have to put a dressing table next to a bed in a corner in every bedroom. It just feel more realistic.