FL ScreenShots

[Gothxtreme]

Here are a couple of screenshots for the first part of my game

[Carnosa]

Mapping needs some work...

[linkline91]

They all are great, I like them but they do need some work. Don't worry though, Same thing for me!

[Red Giant]

Meh. Looks ok to me. Although the chipset for the top-right one looks a little... out of place.

[DragonBlaze]

The top left one is really good, but I don't think it fits with the others. The one on the top right is ok, but the waterfall around the cave looks horrible. Then the bottem left is ok.

There not bad screens, but there not really impressive either.

[Revolution911]

the maps look a little......"square"

[MrMister]

The top-left chipset looks like it's from Dokapon. Is it?

[SonicChaos7]

The top left picture uses the a battle background from Breath of Fire 3 I think it was. The mapping needs work (I'm no expert, but the maps look squarish).  It needs work from what I can see visually, I haveno clue about plot or characters though, since we weren't provided that info.

[Gothxtreme]

I will work on the problems right away.Im sorry this is my first time really making a game im dedicated to and im not very skilled at map making.So any tutorials on it or help would be nice.It seems from the majority my maps are to square..how can i fix this lol.The chipsets dont  give me much to work with in making the mountains come out and such.and ill make profiles fro the characters asap they will be posted here.

[Gothxtreme]

The four  great kingdoms have waged war.

Vandoria the Kingdom of Fire
Galia the Kingdom of Water
Dekord the Kingdom of Earth
and Hildon the Kingdom of Thunder

All are after one thing...to control the four Spheres of Life.Once obtained the owner can control the elements.
The Fire Sphere has just been stolen from Vandoria.As a Vandorian knight you have been assigned to retrieve the sacred sphere and retaliate on the Galian army.After retrieving the sphere you return home.The king is pleased with your work.After returning the sphere you decide to go home.The next day the King has....insisted...that you come to the castle acompanied by several soldiers.When you arrive you are accused of treason.The Fire Sphere has lost its energy and you are being accused...The king has banished you from the kingdom and you are then knocked out and you awake on the shore not to far from the kindoms gate...only to be found by a peasent girl.She assists you and sneaks you into her village(its in Vandoria but its where all the peasents live)After a few days of thinking about what happend you decide to retrace your steps and see what may have made the sphere lose its power.But what you do not know is what dangers lay ahead.

Thats my storyline in a nutshell sorry it wasnt more detailed...Im sort of tired lol its 2 am


And I dont mean to post alot at once but i need to post my characters

[Gothxtreme]

Main female character

[Gothxtreme]

Party member

[Gothxtreme]

Finally the Villan

And I apologize if any of the bios are misspelled i did this all non stop lol

[Gothxtreme]

Another party member

[benosalankelley]

this one looks okay, but yeah, the mapping does need more work.