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Offline Mr. X : Syndicate Leader

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My second art posted here!!!
« on: October 07, 2004, 01:12:32 AM »
Ok!! Now here is a character that not many people like. He's Fuuma from World Heroes.Sorry, but I'm somewhat of a fan of this game. Please, no harsh comments, just compliments or critisisims. Hope you like it! :]]

(Can't wait for his Neo Geo Battle Colossium appearance:D )
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« Reply #1 on: October 07, 2004, 01:40:47 AM »
i like the body structures of ur drawings, but the faces usually seem off...idk y...im not tryn to be an a-hole...im no perfect artist either.I cant draw feet for my life
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« Reply #2 on: October 07, 2004, 01:48:12 AM »
yeah, you have a very nice use of lines and body structure... but the face jsut kinda throws it off.
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« Reply #3 on: October 07, 2004, 01:48:17 AM »
I might sound dum but ..... what does "idk" mean?
Also, I don't mind if you say that their faces are "idk", I'm not that good at drawing really, so I just learn something from every review.
Actually, I thank you for your  comments.
THANK YOU!!!! :D
I just don't want people saying , "OH MY GOD THAT SUCKS!! YOU ARE SO PAPHETIC AT DRAWING, YOU MAKE ME SICK, THAT IS SOOO GAY , BLAH, BLAH BLAH .......
You are not an a hole so don't worry. :]]
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« Reply #4 on: October 07, 2004, 01:50:06 AM »
idk=i dont know
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« Reply #5 on: October 07, 2004, 01:51:47 AM »
The face..... could you please be more specific , you know, like is it the eyes, the hair ,the nose,the mouth.
Please tell me!! I don't mind.
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« Reply #6 on: October 07, 2004, 01:56:40 AM »
hmm....well...the mouth is kinda long ya know? and something about the nose....cant put my finger on it

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« Reply #7 on: October 07, 2004, 02:05:21 AM »
I see what you mean by the mouth, he was supposed to be smiling, but I messed it up while I was inking it. And tha nose.....
well, In a lot of the anime drawn world heroes artwork, Fuuma has a ....... not so sharp nose. So I was trying to make his nose ..well.. umm... "Not so Sharp!!". And NO, you are not being an a hole. RELAX!!!

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« Reply #8 on: October 07, 2004, 02:08:59 AM »
Plus, I think the nose is just a BIT too far to the side of his face.
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« Reply #9 on: October 07, 2004, 02:21:09 AM »
It's a great drawing, but it kinda looks like his face isn't connected to his body.
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« Reply #10 on: October 07, 2004, 05:42:25 AM »
I think that the pic is great ^_^. I like the line work, I see you inked it, coolios. The face is fine. It's just your smooth style they're not used to. Work on the structure a tad and remember weight placment ^_^ just a couple tips. But an over all great job, keep up thegood work
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« Reply #11 on: October 07, 2004, 05:58:18 AM »
I like it. it is the nose, its to, wrongly placed.It belongs like a half a millimeter to the right.
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« Reply #12 on: October 07, 2004, 07:39:28 PM »
Thank you carmen for your tips!!:D They are very helpfull.
Also, thanks everybody for your comments. I'm learning.
(His nose, gotta fix his NOOOOOOSEEEEEE!!!!)   :yell:  
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« Reply #13 on: October 07, 2004, 07:55:12 PM »
Yah, his nose might look better a little to the right, but I don't think it's THAT much of a prob. Your artwork is ace and very definitive, keep it up.
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« Reply #14 on: October 07, 2004, 08:04:07 PM »
(...a little to the right...)  Got it!!! Thanks!!!
Wow!! I though you guys would start yelling at me cause I drew a World Heroes character.(Supposedly one of THE worst games ever!!!)
Man I love these forums. You guys are awsome!!! :D
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