Re-Trying Honor Amongst Thieves

[Grandy]

I just scraped my old RPG Maker project and decided to start anew. This, however, does not affect anything I had done, since all I ever did was to come up with a concept.

 At any rate, I'll give another shoot at RPG Maker. The Project, A.K.A. Honor Amongst Thieves: The Greatest Game You'll Ever Need is, once again, based of in Grandy's backstory up until a certain undertemined point.

 Spoiler as follows, he will most likely die in the end. =O
 Or not. =|
 I'm still not sure.

 At any rate, I've came with... one page of dialogue of a flashback from Grandy, three character concepts, one cool idea, decided to introduce his new pet mascot Meallán the bird, which is not exactly new but none of you guys must have know him. Especially because I just named him.
 Also, it's a Irish name.

 AT ANY RATE.

 I'm calling for help here. Not for coding, at least not now, as I said, I'm still working on dialogues or flashbacks of Grandy's past, most likely half of the game will be a big, huge flashback like FFX was.
 What I need it a team of about four people, preferably people who complain a lot about stories, to find plotholes or contradictions or suggestions on how to make my story better. People who also are not afraid to be spoiled about everything that will happen in the game itself.

 If anyone can draw *looks at ZKX* I believe I'll need some pictures, but, again, it's only but a request.

 I'm also ditching the honor system of my previous game for now, mostly because it's too complicated and I prefer to finish a simple game then make a hueg one that will never get out of the paper. Instead, I'll add some bonus features, like unlockable clothes and itens, and maybe a few clothes cameos. Like as in, unlock the magician's clothes and he suddenly look like Warxe.



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 Currently:
 - Fixing the story
 - Creating character and places

 Characters already done:
 - Grandy (Protagonist)
 - Okneoth (Archer)
 - Meallán (Stupid bird)
 - Arthur Thanenbal Meallán (Person whom the stupid bird was named after)
 - Granevoir (Kingpin)

 Character I plan to add:
 - Devon Firefly (Ex-Mercenary)
 - Atikkus Gizrael (Ex-Studant Mage)
 - Sheng Tzu (Ex-S.W.A.M Elite Agent)
 - Clarice Gillains (Unynployed)
 - Celesh (Dead. Sorry Celesh.)
 - James Willian (Steriotype englishman samurai)
 - More females character (This seems like a sausage fest!)


 Other Twists:
 - If James Willian ever make it into the game, he's so getting an attack called "Tally Ho, Old Chap!". I'm not sure what it'd do, though.

[aboutasoandthis]

 

What I need it a team of about four people, preferably people who complain a lot about stories, to find plotholes or contradictions or suggestions on how to make my story better. People who also are not afraid to be spoiled about everything that will happen in the game itself.

*Violently waves hands in the air screaming "PICK ME! PICK ME!"*

[Grandy]

Originally posted by aboutasoandthis

What I need it a team of about four people, preferably people who complain a lot about stories, to find plotholes or contradictions or suggestions on how to make my story better. People who also are not afraid to be spoiled about everything that will happen in the game itself.

*Violently waves hands in the air screaming "PICK ME! PICK ME!"*[/B]

 DO YOU THINK YOU HAVE WHAT IT NEEDS TO BE PART OF THE WINNING TEAM?!

 ...
 What you need is a MSN.

[aboutasoandthis]

MSN won't open for me. Oh well.

Actually, I managed to get Windows Messenger Live on here. Will this do the same?

It should either be aboutasoandthis@yahoo.com or aboutatasoandthis@hotmail.com.

[Grandy]

Vill do, I zink.

[Dragoon de Sol]

I'll help!


MSN is Winged-Guardian@hotmail.com

[Bluhman]

I has what it takes... Wait, I had what it takes... No, damn... I have hat it takes! Yesh!

[Prpl_Mage]

I remember that bird somehow, not the name but the bird itself.
I'm sure you'll succed with this, I could help you out I guess, but the time-zones might cause some troubles.

So if you need ideas or the kind I can help you, pointing out plotholes and complain isn't my strongest side.

[Vlad Shadeu]

i won't commit myself to being an actual member of the team, and i have no MSN, but i can locate sprite rips, compile sertain battle animations, and do preety much anything else you would need as far as fetching and occasionally modifying pixel art. can't do sound, even if i wanted to. very comfortable with whininga nd complaining about plotholes and such. just give me a holler if you need me. in the bean time i will continualsly get shot with a laser.
 

[Phayre]

Storyline, et cetera I can help with.
Although... the title is eh, and sounds like Sly 3.... also a flashback game.

[Grandy]

Originally posted by Phayre
Storyline, et cetera I can help with.
Although... the title is eh, and sounds like Sly 3.... also a flashback game.

 Heard of it, though I thought in this title before hearing about it.

[Linkforce]

Don't think I've ever seen a screen from this game.

[Grandy]

Originally posted by Linkforce
Don't think I've ever seen a screen from this game.

 Must be bacause there isn't. =D

[Linkforce]

Originally posted by Grandy

Originally posted by Linkforce
Don't think I've ever seen a screen from this game.

 Must be bacause there isn't. =D[/B]

But why no screens?

[ZeroKirbyX]

Roy
Would
Win

:p