Ashes of God

[geffers]

I've been working on this for a pretty long time and I have been revamping it everyday making better harder and more enjoyable. No demo out yet but I have screens, the plot and the chracters. It is made in rm2k.

Plot:
You are prince Demar, the hier to the great Highland thrown, and the great and loyal general of the Highland army. You have been living a great life. You have a great friend, a brother that looks up to you and a mother and father that would odo anything for you. But it all ends.

One day the Kinami invade. But it was strange, they were acting out stradegy something they have never done before. They attacked, they barged into the castle. It looked dim intill Highlands greatest allie arrived, the dragon hikou. A noble country that work along side dragons.  They engstiguish the Hikou threat and the future looked bright intill during the congradulatory dinner your friend dies of poison.

But it was not your friend that should've been killed but your father. Then during the ceremony for your firend an old enemy to the Hikou arrive. You help them defeat the enemies. But when you arrive back at the Highland Castle a terrible accident occurs. King Highland your father, Loard Hikou and his wife all die by another assination attempt.

You are outraged but the worst is still to come. Before your father dies he tells you a terrible secret. A secret that terrifies you makes you feel like a ghost. The secret was that you Demar Prince of Highland, mighty general of the army doesn't exist. You are an orphan found by him and his wife 30 years ago. But the strabgest part was you were not an ordinary child, you came from the sky. You were outraged, scared everything you can think of.

Then more strange things happened a strange Terrikouya(Demon) appeared out of nowhere. You asked him what he was doing here. Then you remembered seeing himwhen Kronan died. He was shocked that you can see him, but he answered saying he was Hanjuka the leader of lost souls. You were scared even more knowing that hanjuka was not a terrikouya but a aland where the dead go. You told him to leave the souls alone. He denied, then he challenged you to a fight, that if you lose he will take the souls and yours, and if you win he will leave them alone. You accept but are filled with anger.

Then anger transforms you into this strange armoured Knight swarming with a blue hue. The terrikouya is shocked but he fights you. You think you can win but you lose. Hanjuka tries to take your soul but it is futile he is not strong enough to take so he leaves you but takes the others.

 You then awake and at that moment you decide to leave Highland for ever. After you leave you meet a man named Hunji with no memory(more to it just not typing it all).You decide to take him to the port to get a job so you can wander the land looking for a home.

 But when you get there you find a terrible secret that casues you to destroy the port(again no typing it) The authorities think you are a criminal and they don't the scret of the port. SO they hunt you down. You and Hunji run from the authorities, and meet more people. you then decide to go back to the castle where you think your brother will protect you, then all the wierd stuff happens...to be continued!
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Obviously that is not the whole plot just a taste( a really big taste) There is more to the beginning and you learn alot more of the past and whatnot. Read that and tell me what you think. There is probably grammer and spelling mistakes and probably places that don't make sence. I'm just too lazy to read it all!

Characters:
Demar:
Wepon: Sword
Skill: Kyoujin- Descibed as the energy of the universe. You can not use it at first in the game but once you meet a strange man he teaches you how to control and how to combine with your sword. Since you are an Ash of God(you learn of the legend in the game) you are the only one that can contol it.
Once the prince and general of Highland. You find out you are an orphan that fell from the sky. You decide to leave your old kingdom in serch of a new place to live and called home. But you meet a man named Hunji you was once possesed by a terrikouya(demon) and that is why he has no memoryof his former life. You then "commit" a crime and are on the run from the aurthorities of Highland. Since you're not general anymore or the prince you don't have immunity from the law. You find out more of the strnage occurences that are happening lately and you find out you are the only one that could stop them.

I'm going to type more later, fingers hurt. there will be more characters like 3 or so. So bear with me, please.

screens:


I edited fire emblem sprites to make the battles more interesting.


Riding a dragon with your friend


An invasion! run!


I'm not your child!?

So tell me what you think, is it good? do you want to hear more, am I wasting your valible computer time? and remember that isn't everything that will be happening in the beginning there is more.

[VahnGrave]

its ok, but, you should change the dragon thing..make a pic of them riding or something, you should also make it so the dragons wings are flapping (if they're not)

[geffers]

I could do that, but I'm going to wait intill more of the game is complete, it's not a major priority. But the dragon is floating up and down.
anyways here's more charatcers.

Hunji
Wepon: Disc- a frisbee like weapon, some what like a boomerang. It is thrown and then returned to the owners hands. Hunji then learns how to keep it in the hair for period of time without throwing it several times.
Skill: Fire Disc- Like Demar Hunji can combine a special energy to his weapon in this case Fire.
Hunji was found by Demar in an old inn pertending to be the deceased owners son. Hunji was not who he says. It turned out Hunji was in fact possesed by an imprisoned terrikouya's soul who was luring people in to his inn and taking their souls so he can return to his original body. Demar stops this and frees hunji. Hunji having no idea what just happened woke up filled with confusion and questions. He accompinies Demar to the port where hunji would get a job.
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Mokusha
Weapon-golves- Relying on his mystical Diegra cards Mokusha rarely goes into direct combat. But when he is forced he pummels them with padded golves
Skill: Diegra Cards- Mystical cards created a century ago that posses the power of the six elements-fire, nature, thunder, wind, earth and water. The elements are sent from the cards by the owners will to severly damage the enemy. When the cards are used repeatedly their strength grows and when they meet a certain strength the card will spawn into new and powerful ones.
Mokusha met Hunji and Demar in a town just beyond the port they thought he was their enemy but it was actually someone else, but who?

Mortamor
Weapon- Kicks-No weapon but is trained in the art of martial arts.
Skill:Gyro-A special ancient technique that requires the user to curse himself so that they would turn into a child and remain like that for ever. But the upside is that they will be able to call on the ancient spirits with a flute and merge with them in battle.
Mortomor met Hunji, Demar and Mokusha in the libary that was being developed by strange force. Mortomor appears small like a child but speaks as though he has lived for centuries. He is able to form into beasts by playing a song. He syas he has no where to go and no family or a home or is this a lie?
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Hows that eh? not alot to go on but more is on the way.

[AsakuraHao2004]

Sounds Good!!

[Red Giant]

Looks and sounds great, but what you need is a top-down view of a dragon for that pic.

[geffers]

Not sure what you mean. Do you mean a full picture for the dragon(which there is) or do you mean looking down at the dragon from above. Excuse me if that question seems dumb I just get lost some times.

[benosalankelley]

You have suikoden 2 chipsets, and have a king named Highland. Unoriginal.
But it is alright have the suikoden 2 chipsets. Highland has already been taken by Kamau and Konami.  

But it does look alright to me. Which is the good part.  

[SaiKar]

Good deep description. Promising.

[MrMister]

Originally posted by benosalankelley
You have suikoden 2 chipsets, and have a king named Highland. Unoriginal.
But it is alright have the suikoden 2 chipsets. Highland has already been taken by Kamau and Konami.  

But it does look alright to me. Which is the good part.  

This coming from you? BTW the 'Kinami' invade

[geffers]

good more replies. Sure kamau used suikedon 2 chipsets, and sure Highland has been in a lot of games and what's Konami going to do to me? track me down murder my family? and I'm sure Kamau doesn't mind he probably didn't even make up the name. But it's only called Highland cause half they're kingdom is on a mountain. If u have any suggestions on a new kingdom name I would be glad to hear them.

[benosalankelley]

"Highland" will come repeative soon enough.  

Can't you think of another kingdom type name. Soon charas
will be spawned with Highlands.  >:

But sure, Kamau was the one who used it second after Komani.
But whatever, use it, but i guess names of countries, cities, or whatever, does'nt have to make the game surpreme.

[peklo1989]

I agree.. I almost used "Highland" in my game but I changed it.. When repeated it sound kinda dull..

[geffers]

i suppose you're alright, but like ben said the countries don't make the game. plus it's only mentioned in the beginning of the game then only mentioned once or twice later on. anyways. I've made some progress with the game. but I'm going to be making a site about it where all the updates, screenshots, features and terms will be. SO expect it up in the next two days.

[MrMister]

Originally posted by geffers
only mentioned once or twice later on.

Wow, your story sounds impressive now -_-

[geffers]

Originally posted by MrMister

quote:

Originally posted by geffers only mentioned once or twice later on.

Wow, your story sounds impressive now -_-

u mean it wasn't impressive before!