My Sprites

[Osmose]

... you're comparing a sprite comic to X-Men?

Sprite comics, almost all of them, are humor comics. I have almost never seen a sprite comic that wasn't about jokes and stuff(the ones I did see weren't that good. Only one has actually ever pulled it off successfully.).

[SaiKar]

You saw mine! It was not good and did not pull it off successfully! Yay!

[Revolution911]

ive seen non humerous srpite comics

[Mikado]

well if you're read the intro here is the intro comic, it happened right after the intro!

[SnakeIzeGambit]

well this is not a humerous sprite comic moose. its an action comic.


and mikado u really need to make original names. I've played th Bouncer and i kno who Duragon C. Mikado is but thats sprite is not him. And the storyline is weak.

[Red Giant]

Ugh. I give up. You're not listening to anyone.

[Mikado]

just because i don't make humourous comics duzn't meen its automatically a bad comic, and if it is a bad comic y do u look at it? is it to humor urselves? i don't like to be humorous i'm a fighter! and action horror and darkness is me and if you don't like it too bad, i'm still going to make the comics for the sake of it

[SnakeIzeGambit]

ok now u jus need to shut up, breathe/cool down and look at my previous posts. ive known it was an action comic the whole time and ive given u things to fix to make it a better action comic.


u added the text into the frames which is a + but u need to work on making original names for ur characters.
u also need to make a better storyline. The whole having to kill everybody story is weak and should be worked on and improved.


if u dont want feedback on ur comic than dont post it here, that jus leaves it open for ridicule and criticism.

[Mikado]

as i said earlier i can take critisims as much as the next person but as u can see i'm not to good on making up stories, and again i'm a fighter and fighting is what i like so i'm gonna keep making the comics if you like it or not

[SnakeIzeGambit]

ok so dont post nemore comics here or else ur gonna get flamed cuz it sucks

[Revolution911]

Originally posted by Mikado
just because i don't make humourous comics duzn't meen its automatically a bad comic, and if it is a bad comic y do u look at it? is it to humor urselves? i don't like to be humorous i'm a fighter! and action horror and darkness is me and if you don't like it too bad, i'm still going to make the comics for the sake of it

its not that its not humerous. its that they suck. is that clear enought for you? look u obviously cant take critisism. we have given u info u need to improve on comics. yet u refuse to be wrong so u say w/e u do well say it sux. heres an idea. MAKE A GOOD COMIC. then we wont say it sux. harsh yes, but its the facts

[-Hefestos-]

Ok ok.... let's see...

You said this Mikado:


Introduction: THE BEGINNING

Masenko D. Mikado brother of his arrogent but succesful sibling, Duaragon C. Mikado. Masenko was a great fighter aswell as Mikado, they were a great team until they came across a man named Jin Kutegouwa, a well known buisness man that would kill anyone if he did get what he wanted, he had told the brothers to retreive a sword for him since Jin had heard the rumor that Masenko and Mikado were the best fighting team. The brothers had no choice but to accept, the next night they retrieved it, but Masenko was way to geedy to just give up the sword for he knew what great power lies in the blade, it has said that who ever weilded the blade was granted enhanced stealth, strength, and speed making the weilder invincible, but in return you must for fill its lust for human blood, if not then it will feed on yours. Mikado was 19 and Masenko 20. When Masenko realized how powerful Jin was.....it was to late!( after your done reading this boring thing you can look at the intro comic thing!)

Let me give you some more advices...


Ok, the Mikado brothers are a figthing team, but... why do they fight for?, revenge?, to amuse people?, got beat up as kids so they want a massive come back in humanity? ( not to mention that their story reminded me guys such as Terry and Andy bogard from the "Fatal Fury" series, or the lee brothers from "Double Dragon")

Moving on...


Then you said that...

[/until they came across a man named Jin Kutegouwa, a well known buisness man that would kill anyone if he did get what he wanted

Geese Howard!! ( oops...  sorry   ) ( gotta be more creative )  "and the brothers have to do what that guy wants"
I thought they were strong or something... ¬__¬

One of the powers of the sword.... IS STEALTH!!....    

but in return you must for fill its lust for human blood, if not then it will feed on yours.

Yeah... I've played  the "Shinobi" too... great SEGA game...

  Originality is the answer...


Sooooo.... I just suggest you start from scratch or MODIFY the story some more, but hey!! its your comic kid



C' ya


 

[Mikado]

nevermind the comics, i'm just going to make pointless fights for my ****ing amusment, if you don't like it o well if you do however, I thank you, geese, you guys and ur story suz critisims r annoying! as you can see i'm not a story person i a fighter! and fight comics is what I do and what I stick to........

[SnakeIzeGambit]

nevermind the comics,

and fight comics is what I do and what I stick to........

a lil bit of a contradiction

you guys and ur story suz critisims r annoying!

and ur no story sh*t is also annoying. go ahead and make ur lousy comics since we have all tried to show u what u need to do to make it better(and i dont think u should call wut ur making a comic since its jus a bunch of frames with no meaning).

[Revolution911]

if u suck at storys why are you making comics? there the heart of the comic