Title Screen

[oooog]

I made this title screen today, well, actually, yesterday, it just turned mid-night.  It took me several hours to complete, 7 to be most accurate, and I'm still not too pleased with it.  It's missing something....tree's....Lot's of tree's to go with the ruins look.  I'm bad at aking tree's, so it'll take a few more hours to complete before I'm entirely satisfied.  I know, portions of the screen don't match up to be perfectly parallel (I think that's how it's spelled), or vertical.  Keep in mind though,  I made this entirely from scratch.  I would like to request that no-one use it at the present moment.  I don't want it on-screen of a game untill I am entirely satisfied with it.  I thought I'd just post to show my progress with it.  Feel free to comment, or to simply take a stab as to how I can improve it, OR, better yet, teahc me how to make tree's.  This is my first attempt to make something like this.  Keep that in mind as well.

P.S.  Orkyjork90 is my secondary name.  When I made this account, I didn't decide on a name to..well..name everything by, thus oooog was born.  But, I'd just like to let you all know, Orkyjork90 is me, if you come across that name.

[ivan mage]

HOLY CRAP THATS GOOD!     (were not worthy!)

[oooog]

Thanks, wait untill I'm actually done and happy with it.  

[Red Fox]

HOLY CHICKENS!!!! tht is awsome

[Rikushinblade]

looks cool keep up the good work......

[oooog]

Wow...I might start making more of these if I get these kinda responses..  Thanks.   I'm still trying to make the tree's...But it's noit goin to well.

[blaman]

THAT IS AWSOME!!!
Other than that, I'm speechless.

[maxine]

friggin' good mate

[oooog]

Lil announcment.  I tried to put it, as in, into the RPG Maker title screen section....It didn't work.  I tried reducing it....It looked crappy.  I tried just taking the coolest part out (The sword) and making that the title...It looked incomplete.  So, I'm asking, could someone please reduce the size, making it look both non-crappy, and non-incompletel, and still be able to put it into RPG Maker?

P.S.  I decided after many attempts, I should say FAILING attempts, spanding well over 8 hours to make A......meaning 1 (Just wanted to emphasize that) tree, I decided to leave it the way it is.
 P.S.#2.  Pretty soon, I might make a request thread for these things if people REALLY like my work.

[Datriot]

oh, yeah! I really want a good title like this! I hope you make the thread then! Good work, it's a really good title!:)

[coldwinter44]

****.. your are a real god of title screen !!! make more dude !!! your really good

[Bluhman]

It's great looking; Though I KNOW I could do the shading better.

Then again you aren't done with it so I don't know what to expect.

[Napoleon]

good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ogggggggggggggggggy dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[WarxePB]

Napoleon, don't kick topics. If the last post date is over 2 weeks ago, don't post, unless it's important. And your post... wasn't exactly important.
Just refrain from doing it in the future.

[SaiKar]

No one ever did it? Took like 5 minutes. Here ya go if anyone still cares.