Neolith - Story Add-On Pack One

[Prpl_Mage]

Please guys. Don't make this start again.
Gem is trying to help you improve. He just doesn't bother making it sound kind.

So yeah, I suppose you have to live with that.
Just remember that words can't bring you down. Now get back to work.

[ThexXtremeXx]

*Nods* I will!

[Ben]

Yeah, Im quite a bit more polite with constructive crit when the person dosent have a habbit of whinig every time i say something they dont want to hear.

[ThexXtremeXx]

*ignores*

[ThexXtremeXx]

I admit, I really don't know what the note says, i just wrote it then imported it. But no
worries. These journal entries are there for the purpose of letting you gain rewards without
doing a bunch of complex things.(Which doesn't sound like a bad idea at all...)

[Prpl_Mage]

That might work as long as you have some complex quests out there.
So getting the best weapon isn't in the page from a dairy.

[ThexXtremeXx]

Story Updated, check it out.

[ThexXtremeXx]

Color Tinter added, and New intro pics.

[Rahl]

Looks better, a few grammatic errors though.

[ThexXtremeXx]

hmm...i didn't really check..
can you point them out?

[loftyD]

this looks really nice, and dark. I love the colours you've used.

[ThexXtremeXx]

thanks, but people have been complaining that's its a little too dark, so I'm adding
the color tint feature.

[loftyD]

, dark games == atmosphere.

[ThexXtremeXx]

atmosphere=awesome

EDIT: I've just noticed that this is becoming more of a survival game now.
that's also a good thing, because survival games are my favorite, and the
way the atmosphere in the game is already will make this survival/horror game
even awesomer.

[loftyD]

excellent I'll be looking out for this. This looks good.